DG comments Wk10-Tutorial

[ryanYtan]

Sorry not very detailed / specific.

Section 3.2

Sequence Diagram has dangling activation bar
They should talk about why they have the current choice.

3.3

"/ maybe insert screenshot to show expected output"
3.3.2 alternative is trivial (can be improved)

3.4

3.4.1 diagram too excessive
3.4.2 "Excersie we had morphed"
3.4.2 markup for code not enforced in list
3.4.2 markup for code not enforced in paragraph

3.5
no multiplicity for UML
is brackets on "Menstrual Cycle (for Females)" necessary?
really large sequence diagram
got code block in a paragraph in 3.5.2
format is in old frowned upon way
figure 14 DeletePageCommand activation bar dangling
"/ maybe insert a screenshot to show the expected output"
data structures not a good alternative

general comments:
some figures have no figure number