From 778436703c558a7418100f89b554d8c0eca41274 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Allan=20Nordh=C3=B8y?= <epost@anotheragency.no>
Date: Sun, 19 Jan 2020 16:40:36 +0100
Subject: [PATCH 1/3] Volunteer landing page reworked

---
 volunteers/templates/static/promo.html | 24 ++++++++++++------------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

diff --git a/volunteers/templates/static/promo.html b/volunteers/templates/static/promo.html
index 1033700..d306e10 100644
--- a/volunteers/templates/static/promo.html
+++ b/volunteers/templates/static/promo.html
@@ -3,38 +3,38 @@
 <div id="intro">
     <h2 class="intro"><span>FOSDEM</span><br/>Volunteering</h2>
 
-    <p class="intro">This is a site that brings all the volunteers together.
-    Find all the cool tasks that you are interested in.</p>
+    <p class="intro">This site brings all volunteers together.
+    Find cool tasks you are interested in.</p>
 
-    <p id="xtra-info">Problems? For bugs you can report an issue at
-    <a href="https://github.com/FOSDEM/volunteers/issues">Github</a>.</p>
+    <p id="xtra-info">Problems? Fix or report bugs as issues at
+    <a href="https://github.com/FOSDEM/volunteers/issues">GitHub</a>.</p>
 </div><!-- /intro-->
 
 <ul class="features">
     <li><h3>FOSDEM</h3>
-        <p><a href="https://www.fosdem.org">FOSDEM</a> is a free event that offers open source
+        <p><a href="https://www.fosdem.org">FOSDEM</a> is a gratis event that offers libre software
         communities a place to meet, share ideas and collaborate.</p>
     </li>
 
-    <li><h3>Location</h3>
-        <p>FOSDEM will take place at the<a href="https://fosdem.org/practical/transportation/">
+    <li><h3><a href="https://www.openstreetmap.org/way/30358555#map=15/50.8207/4.3966">Location</a></h3>
+        <p>FOSDEM takes place at the<a href="https://fosdem.org/practical/transportation/">
         ULB Solbosch Campus, Brussels, Belgium, Europe, Earth</a>.</p>
     </li>
 
     <li><h3>Volunteering</h3>
-        <p>FOSDEM needs you! Every year, the FOSDEM team is assisted by an enthusiastic team of volunteers
-        to help out with various tasks and make the event a fun and safe place for all our visitors.</p>
+        <p>FOSDEM needs you! Every year. Enthusiastic volunteers assist the FOSDEM team,
+        in making the event—fun and safe for all.</p>
     </li>
 </ul>
 
 <ul class="features">
     <li><h3>Mailing List</h3>
-			<p>You can subscribe to receive updates from the <a href="https://lists.fosdem.org/listinfo/volunteers">mailing list</a></p>
-			<p>You can post a message to all the members, send email to <a href="mailto:volunteers@lists.fosdem.org">volunteers@lists.fosdem.org</a></p>
+			<p>Subscribe to receive updates from the <a href="https://lists.fosdem.org/listinfo/volunteers">mailing list</a></p>
+			<p>Post a message to all by e-mailing <a href="mailto:volunteers@lists.fosdem.org">volunteers@lists.fosdem.org</a></p>
     </li>
 
     <li><h3>IRC</h3>
-        <p>IRC is available in <a href="irc://chat.freenode.net/fosdem-volunteers">#fosdem-volunteers</a> (<a href="http://webchat.freenode.net/?channels=fosdem-volunteers">webchat</a>) on <a href="http://freenode.net/">freenode</a></p>
+        <p>Available in <a href="irc://chat.freenode.net/fosdem-volunteers">#fosdem-volunteers</a> (<a href="https://webchat.freenode.net/?channels=fosdem-volunteers">webchat</a>) on <a href="https://freenode.net/">freenode</a></p>
     </li>
 
     <li><h3>Real People</h3>

From 8b7259af67de13e058c167e7deb3f65ab3c76e9f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Allan=20Nordh=C3=B8y?= <epost@anotheragency.no>
Date: Sun, 19 Jan 2020 18:47:02 +0100
Subject: [PATCH 2/3] OSM location link removed

---
 volunteers/templates/static/promo.html | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/volunteers/templates/static/promo.html b/volunteers/templates/static/promo.html
index d306e10..8ae5377 100644
--- a/volunteers/templates/static/promo.html
+++ b/volunteers/templates/static/promo.html
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ <h2 class="intro"><span>FOSDEM</span><br/>Volunteering</h2>
         communities a place to meet, share ideas and collaborate.</p>
     </li>
 
-    <li><h3><a href="https://www.openstreetmap.org/way/30358555#map=15/50.8207/4.3966">Location</a></h3>
+    <li><h3>Location</h3>
         <p>FOSDEM takes place at the<a href="https://fosdem.org/practical/transportation/">
         ULB Solbosch Campus, Brussels, Belgium, Europe, Earth</a>.</p>
     </li>

From 67105cf153a84b94cd6d5295edcfdc02df9a9958 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Allan=20Nordh=C3=B8y?= <epost@anotheragency.no>
Date: Mon, 20 Jan 2020 00:05:48 +0100
Subject: [PATCH 3/3] Spelling: making this fun event also safe

---
 volunteers/templates/static/promo.html | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/volunteers/templates/static/promo.html b/volunteers/templates/static/promo.html
index 8ae5377..9abc7d5 100644
--- a/volunteers/templates/static/promo.html
+++ b/volunteers/templates/static/promo.html
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ <h2 class="intro"><span>FOSDEM</span><br/>Volunteering</h2>
 
     <li><h3>Volunteering</h3>
         <p>FOSDEM needs you! Every year. Enthusiastic volunteers assist the FOSDEM team,
-        in making the event—fun and safe for all.</p>
+        making this fun event also safe for all.</p>
     </li>
 </ul>