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Book 2.8: Instances introduction needs improvement #1467

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hollasch opened this issue Mar 27, 2024 · 0 comments
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Book 2.8: Instances introduction needs improvement #1467

hollasch opened this issue Mar 27, 2024 · 0 comments
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hollasch commented Mar 27, 2024

The end of the introductory part of the Instances section — the paragraph beginning with "Now that we have boxes, …" — needs some rework. Besides rewording, the sentence "This is especially easy …" should start its own paragraph, probably preceded by the figure.

Further, the figure is wrong, as it shows both the ray and the box moving in the same way, instead of the ray undergoing an inverse transformation. We could use a better figure for this.

@hollasch hollasch added this to the v4.0.0-alpha.2-release milestone Mar 27, 2024
@hollasch hollasch self-assigned this Mar 27, 2024
@rupsis rupsis changed the title Book 1 Instances introduction needs improvement Book 2 Instances introduction needs improvement Mar 29, 2024
@hollasch hollasch changed the title Book 2 Instances introduction needs improvement Book 2.8: Instances introduction needs improvement Apr 19, 2024
@hollasch hollasch modified the milestones: v4.0.0, Backlog, v4.0.1 Jul 22, 2024
@hollasch hollasch modified the milestones: v4.0.1, Backlog, v4.0.2 Aug 21, 2024
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