From 6a1503fb06431381a83d187b4138d12065876174 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: TheGiraffe3 <145969603+TheGiraffe3@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Tue, 7 Jan 2025 11:35:24 +0300 Subject: [PATCH] Slight text improvement --- data/jibauni/jibauni culture conversations.txt | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/data/jibauni/jibauni culture conversations.txt b/data/jibauni/jibauni culture conversations.txt index 4a14491..4908ef2 100644 --- a/data/jibauni/jibauni culture conversations.txt +++ b/data/jibauni/jibauni culture conversations.txt @@ -20,19 +20,19 @@ mission "Jibauni Culture: Rebel Chase" random < 1 on offer conversation - `As you are walking through the spaceport, you hear a commotion behind you. A Jibauni is running your way, and behind it are several more in some sort of uniform.` + `As you are walking through the crowded spaceport of , a commotion breaks out behind you. A Rebel Jibauni streaks your way, and behind it are several more in dark green uniforms and yellow boots.` choice ` (Go back to and wait for the ruckus to calm down.)` goto wait ` "What is going on?"` goto question - ` (Stay where you are.)` + ` (Ignore the interruption.)` goto runinto label wait ` You go back to . The Jibauni who was being chased comes running your way, but is caught by the others and put in chains before passing your ship.` decline label runinto - ` As you stand where you are, the Jibauni come racing your way, knocking you down as the chase continues. Once all of the soldiers pass, a bystander helps you up and brushes you off, telling you that scenes like this are fairly frequent, happening either when a Jibauni is accused of stealing... or does something people of power dislike.` + ` As you stand where you are, the Jibauni come racing your way, knocking you down as the chase continues. Once all of the soldiers pass, a bystander helps you up and brushes you off, telling you that scenes like this are fairly frequent in Rebel space.` decline label question ` All of the Jibauni keep running past you, intent on what they are doing. After the traces are gone, a bystander tells you that scenes like this are fairly frequent, when a Jibauni is accused of stealing... or doing something the Governor does not like.`