From af66be41e95919974b15c1917a7602508ff39e71 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: TheGiraffe3 <145969603+TheGiraffe3@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 9 Dec 2024 13:43:06 +0300
Subject: [PATCH] Baitoon description update

---
 data/map planets.txt | 11 ++++-------
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/data/map planets.txt b/data/map planets.txt
index 3d47eaa..8a8e9f5 100644
--- a/data/map planets.txt	
+++ b/data/map planets.txt	
@@ -21,28 +21,25 @@ planet Andwerfen
 planet Baitoon
 	attributes homeworld jibauni
 	landscape land/baitoon
-	description `This is where the Jibauni started, and presumably where the seat of the Normal Jibauni government is. Many Jibauni are moving about in the long, narrow passageways between the landing pads, many of which are old and cracked.`
-	description `	There used to be other dinosaurs on this planet, but the Jibauni have transplanted them to a different planet, Owiay, where they thrive much better.`
+	description `Baitoon is the planet where the Jibauni were created, and presumably where the seat of the Normal Jibauni government convenes. Many Jibauni move about in long, narrow passageways between the landing pads, many of which, old and cracked, have received no maintenence for generations.`
+	description `	Other dinosaurs used to live on this planet, but the Jibauni have transplanted them to a different planet, Owiay, where they thrive and grow much better then they would in a land of T. Rexes.`
 		to display
 			has "jibauni knowledge: dinosaur skulls"
-	spaceport `This is the oldest existing spaceport in Jibauni space, and has many different sizes of hangars and pads to compensate for the large amounts of traffic this planet gets, because it is the third tourist destination in all of Jibauni space. All the buildings here are also old, and many of them are small and close together.`
+	spaceport `This is the oldest existing spaceport in Jibauni space, and is filled with many different sizes of hangars and pads to compensate for the large amounts of traffic this planet gets as the third tourist destination in all of Jibauni space. Every buildings here is old, many small and close together.`
 	government Jibauni
-	shipyard Diba
-	shipyard Cheat
 	shipyard "Aboagye Basics"
 	shipyard "Resredi Advanced"
 	shipyard "Resredi Basics"
 	shipyard "Jibauni Colonism"
 	outfitter "Jibauni Advanced"
 	outfitter "Jibauni Basics"
-	outfitter Cheat
 	"required reputation" 3
 	security 0.8
 
 planet Buhayra
 	attributes uninhabited
 	landscape land/buhayra
-	description `Deadly acids and innocent rocks are the defining features of Buhayra. Yet caution does well to be exercised, because in the pools great fish lurk, and not all of the rocks can be trusted to stay in one place.`
+	description `Deadly acids and innocent rocks define the features of Buhayra. Yet caution does well to be exercised, because in the pools great fish lurk, and not all of the rocks can be trusted to stay in one place.`
 
 planet Caya
 	attributes uninhabited