From e1fe4a103a5b46dee19d75f8566776b37cff13e7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Chay Choong <hi@chay.dev>
Date: Mon, 28 Oct 2024 07:37:47 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] content: small rewording

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 index.html | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index f807708..e9ddb4a 100644
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+++ b/index.html
@@ -267,11 +267,11 @@ <h2>Work</h2>
                 <li>
                   <strong>Platform Engineer</strong><br />
                   <weak>Jan 2022 - now</weak>
-                  <p>Good data is a fundamental prerequisite for creating good ML models, but they can be hard to
-                    obtain. Bifrost fills this gap by using 3D graphics to generate visual synthetic data.
+                  <p>Good data is needed for creating good ML models, but they can be hard to obtain. Bifrost uses 3D
+                    graphics to generate visual synthetic data for training specialised computer vision models.
                     <br /><br />
                     We have a diverse tech stack, including webapps, 3D applications (Unreal, Blender, Houdini),
-                    streaming servers, ML pipelines; I design how everything fits together.
+                    streaming servers, ML pipelines; I design how everything is pieced together.
                   </p>
                 </li>
               </ul>