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Unit Descriptions #13

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Konrad22 opened this issue May 30, 2018 · 5 comments
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Unit Descriptions #13

Konrad22 opened this issue May 30, 2018 · 5 comments
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Strongbow: The unit is using a 'short sword' while the unit description says 'dirk'.

Eagle Master: '...they no long need to give orders to their mounts, those anticipate them.'
This kinda looks wrong/weird. Maybe add a 'because/as' before 'those'? And probably make the long longer.

Pikeman/Guardian/Captain/Wizard: They lack a 'No desecription avaible' or 'TODO'. It's just blank :(

Guard: '...Guards willingly forgo some of thier mobility...'

Sorceress: The decription refers to the 'Royal orders of Wesnothian Magi' (orders should be Orders, right?) which don't really exist anymore. ...right?

Matrix Core and Matrix Flow System are a bit too identical in their desriptions...

Overlord/Headhunter/Marauder/Soulhunter are missing(?) the Chaos prefix.

@Konrad22 Konrad22 changed the title Description Strongbow Unit Descriptions May 30, 2018
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I'm done with reading all the descriptions, I didn't notice anything else.

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Chaos Cardinal
'...ultimately repeled their...' -> '...ultimately repelled their...'

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Konrad22 commented Dec 17, 2018

Aragwaith Swordsmaster (part of the unit description)
'...Having earned their title, Swordsmasters take responsibility for instructing the young, passing by generation on generation the proud Aragwaithi martial traditions.'
Shouldn't it be 'passing on generation by generation'? (I'm really not sure, but it somehow looks weird.)

@irydacea irydacea transferred this issue from project-ethea/Invasion_from_the_Unknown Aug 3, 2020
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irydacea commented Aug 3, 2020

  • Aragwaith Swordsmaster: description completely redone in bae85f4
  • Chaos Cardinal: typo fixed in b960ca2.
  • Chaos Overlord et al lacking the 'Chaos' qualifier: insufficient information to decide whether that's a bug or a feature.
  • Aragwaith Guard: description redone in 834e6d5.
  • Aragwaith Sorceress: description completely redone in 1ee7001, it was a 2007 EE holdover like most of everything else involving the Aragwaith.

To-do:

  • Aragwaith Strongbow: meh.
  • Aragwaith Eagle Master: meh.
  • Verlissh Matrix Core, Verlissh Matrix Flow System: meh.
  • A lot of units are missing descriptions. Having "TODO" or "FIXME" in place should be considered a bug in and of itself.

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irydacea commented Aug 3, 2020

On the note of missing descriptions, I'd greatly welcome help with those for generic* units of any kind. The only requirement is that they are Ethea canon-compliant and written in the same prose style as the rest.

(* It should be pretty obvious what counts as a generic unit and what does not. Generally speaking, any unit type which only exists in the game to implement one or more named characters as opposed to random recruits and guards is not generic.)

EDIT: Tracking this part of the issue in #14 instead.

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