From 0bae2ce6a89fe9ee6503084763931a7aee1dd8d9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Preston Mueller <skierjunk@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 5 Apr 2024 01:47:29 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] fix: just back again with some spelling/grammar tightening up

---
 common/components/notices/BetaDataNotice.tsx   | 11 ++++++-----
 common/components/notices/BusDataNotice.tsx    |  2 +-
 common/components/notices/GobbleDataNotice.tsx | 13 +++++++------
 common/components/notices/TerminusNotice.tsx   |  2 +-
 4 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/common/components/notices/BetaDataNotice.tsx b/common/components/notices/BetaDataNotice.tsx
index 4611dafe4..b82380477 100644
--- a/common/components/notices/BetaDataNotice.tsx
+++ b/common/components/notices/BetaDataNotice.tsx
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ export const BetaDataNotice: React.FC = () => {
             <h3 className="text-sm font-medium text-yellow-800">Real-time bus data is in beta</h3>
             <div className="mt-2 text-sm text-yellow-700">
               <p>
-                Data shown here is collected by TransitMatters using the{' '}
+                TransitMatters collects this data using the{' '}
                 <Link
                   href="https://www.mbta.com/developers/v3-api/streaming"
                   rel="noopener noreferrer"
@@ -42,20 +42,21 @@ export const BetaDataNotice: React.FC = () => {
                 >
                   MBTA's V3 API
                 </Link>
-                . Unlike other data sources we show, this data is not cleaned or filtered in any way
-                before display. Please expect reduced accuracy.
+                . Unlike data from other sources, it is not cleaned or filtered before display.
+                Please expect reduced accuracy.
               </p>
               <p>
                 We favor official performance data from the MBTA when it's available. Technical
-                details of our data collection can be found{' '}
+                details of our data collection are available in our{' '}
                 <Link
                   href="https://github.com/transitmatters/gobble"
                   rel="noopener noreferrer"
                   target="_blank"
                   className={classNames(lineColorTextHover[line ?? 'DEFAULT'])}
                 >
-                  here
+                  GitHub repository
                 </Link>
+                .
               </p>
             </div>
           </div>
diff --git a/common/components/notices/BusDataNotice.tsx b/common/components/notices/BusDataNotice.tsx
index a01184f61..14fbbb91c 100644
--- a/common/components/notices/BusDataNotice.tsx
+++ b/common/components/notices/BusDataNotice.tsx
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ export const BusDataNotice: React.FC = () => {
             Due to data collection issues, bus data is not guaranteed to be complete for any stop or
             date.
           </p>
-          <p>This may lead to inaccuracies, particularly in headway calculations.</p>
+          <p>This may lead to inaccuracy, particularly in headway calculations.</p>
         </div>
       </div>
     );
diff --git a/common/components/notices/GobbleDataNotice.tsx b/common/components/notices/GobbleDataNotice.tsx
index 374cc5a2f..f0409ee4b 100644
--- a/common/components/notices/GobbleDataNotice.tsx
+++ b/common/components/notices/GobbleDataNotice.tsx
@@ -29,29 +29,30 @@ export const GobbleDataNotice: React.FC = () => {
         <FontAwesomeIcon icon={faChartSimple} size={'lg'} />
         <div className={'mx-3 my-2 text-sm italic'}>
           <p>
-            Data shown here is collected by TransitMatters using the{' '}
+            TransitMatters collects this data using the{' '}
             <Link
               href="https://www.mbta.com/developers/v3-api/streaming"
               rel="noopener noreferrer"
               target="_blank"
               className={classNames(lineColorTextHover[line ?? 'DEFAULT'])}
             >
-              MBTA's streaming API
+              MBTA's V3 API
             </Link>
-            . Unlike other data sources we show, this data is not cleaned or filtered in any way
-            before display. Innacuracies may be present.
+            . Unlike data from other sources, this data is not cleaned or filtered. Please expect
+            reduced accuracy.
           </p>
           <p>
             Official MBTA data will be shown when available. Technical details of our data
-            collection can be found{' '}
+            collection can be found in our{' '}
             <Link
               href="https://github.com/transitmatters/gobble"
               rel="noopener noreferrer"
               target="_blank"
               className={classNames(lineColorTextHover[line ?? 'DEFAULT'])}
             >
-              here
+              GitHub repository
             </Link>
+            .
           </p>
         </div>
       </div>
diff --git a/common/components/notices/TerminusNotice.tsx b/common/components/notices/TerminusNotice.tsx
index 98f6e00e8..97bbdc7d3 100644
--- a/common/components/notices/TerminusNotice.tsx
+++ b/common/components/notices/TerminusNotice.tsx
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ export const TerminusNotice: React.FC<TerminusNoticeProps> = ({ toStation, fromS
             Due to data collection issues at terminus stations, data is not guaranteed to be
             complete.
           </p>
-          <p>This may lead to inaccuracies, particularly in travel time & dwell calculations.</p>
+          <p>This may lead to inaccuracy, particularly in travel time & dwell calculations.</p>
         </div>
       </div>
     );