Away Site Tweaks - More than Salt and Pepper. (Aurorastation#19261)

Altered the descriptions for bigderelict, cursed, firstaurora, and
wrecked_nt_ship to be longer, and have some more flavor to them.

html/changelogs/CourierBravo-TheFlavoring.yml

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+################################
+# Example Changelog File
+#
+# Note: This file, and files beginning with ".", and files that don't end in ".yml" will not be read. If you change this file, you will look really dumb.
+#
+# Your changelog will be merged with a master changelog. (New stuff added only, and only on the date entry for the day it was merged.)
+# When it is, any changes listed below will disappear.
+#
+# Valid Prefixes:
+#   bugfix
+#     - (fixes bugs)
+#   wip
+#     - (work in progress)
+#   qol
+#     - (quality of life)
+#   soundadd
+#     - (adds a sound)
+#   sounddel
+#     - (removes a sound)
+#   rscadd
+#     - (adds a feature)
+#   rscdel
+#     - (removes a feature)
+#   imageadd
+#     - (adds an image or sprite)
+#   imagedel
+#     - (removes an image or sprite)
+#   spellcheck
+#     - (fixes spelling or grammar)
+#   experiment
+#     - (experimental change)
+#   balance
+#     - (balance changes)
+#   code_imp
+#     - (misc internal code change)
+#   refactor
+#     - (refactors code)
+#   config
+#     - (makes a change to the config files)
+#   admin
+#     - (makes changes to administrator tools)
+#   server
+#     - (miscellaneous changes to server)
+#################################
+
+# Your name.
+author: CourierBravo
+
+# Optional: Remove this file after generating master changelog.  Useful for PR changelogs that won't get used again.
+delete-after: True
+
+# Any changes you've made.  See valid prefix list above.
+# INDENT WITH TWO SPACES.  NOT TABS.  SPACES.
+# SCREW THIS UP AND IT WON'T WORK.
+# Also, this gets changed to [] after reading.  Just remove the brackets when you add new shit.
+# Please surround your changes in  double quotes ("). It works without them, but if you use certain characters it screws up compiling. The quotes will not show up in the changelog.
+changes:
+  - qol: "Expanded the description of four away sites with only a single line or two of flavor."

maps/away/away_site/abandoned_mining/cursed.dm

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 /obj/effect/overmap/visitable/sector/cursed
 	name = "lone asteroid"
-	desc = "A lone asteroid with a hangar. Latest data from this sector shows it as a Hephaestus mining station, two years ago."
+	desc = "A lone asteroid with a hangar. Latest data from this sector shows it was a Hephaestus mining station, two years ago. Unknown biological lifesigns have been detected inside, though the station is cold. There's various low and high frequency radiation sources across the spectrum within the rock. Extraordinarily high exotic particle counts are being detected as well."
 
 
 /area/cursed

maps/away/away_site/big_derelict/bigderelict.dm

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
 
 /obj/effect/overmap/visitable/sector/big_derelict
 	name = "large derelict"
-	desc = "A very large derelict station. According to the starmap, it shouldn't exist."
+	desc = "A very large derelict station. The sensor array is picking up large amounts of echo, suggesting large, hollow spaces within. Unknown biological lifesigns have been detected inside the station. There is no starmap record of a station ever being in this location."
 
 /obj/effect/overmap/visitable/sector/big_derelict/get_skybox_representation()
 	var/image/skybox_image = image('icons/skybox/wrecks.dmi', "debris_large2")

maps/away/away_site/first_aurora/first_aurora.dm

@@ -18,5 +18,5 @@
 
 /obj/effect/overmap/visitable/sector/first_aurora
 	name = "space station derelict"
-	desc = "An abandoned space structure."
+	desc = "A massive abandoned space structure. Debris are strewn about the area, making approach difficult and outright dangerous for anything larger than a shuttle. Some elements of its architecture match archived NanoTrasen blueprints."
 

maps/away/away_site/wrecked_nt_ship/wrecked_nt_ship.dm

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 /obj/effect/overmap/visitable/wrecked_nt_ship
 	name = "wrecked NT ship"
-	desc = "A wrecked ship once owned by NanoTrasen."
+	desc = "A wrecked ship once owned by NanoTrasen, embedded within an asteroid. The ship is cold, with a faint possible lifesign detected within. Sensors have picked up exotic particles on site."
 
 /area/wrecked_nt_ship
 	name = "wrecked NT ship"