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-# Welcome to Our Website's New Look!
+# Visual Update
 
-We are pleased to announce that our website has a new design as of today! This change is more than just a visual refresh; it's about improving the way we share our projects and related documentation. Our goal has always been to provide you with a smooth and engaging experience on our website, and this redesign brings us closer to that goal.
+We are pleased to announce that our website has a new design as of today! With this change, we are trying to standardise the documentation we provide to the C2SM community.  Although the look has changed, you should be able to find all the necessary information as before, as the general menu structure has been maintained.
 
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 ## Why We Chose Material for MkDocs
 
-For this redesign, we chose [Material for MkDocs :material-open-in-new:](https://squidfunk.github.io/mkdocs-material/){:target="_blank"}, a tool that helps us create a modern and responsive site. Material for MkDocs is also the tool of choice for CSCS and their documentation pages.
+For this redesign, we chose [Material for MkDocs :material-open-in-new:](https://squidfunk.github.io/mkdocs-material/){:target="_blank"}, a tool that generates modern and responsive documentation pages based on Markdown files. Material for MkDocs is also the tool of choice for CSCS and their documentation pages.
 
-A big advantage of Material for MkDocs is how it helps us keep a consistent style across all our documentation. It is important to us that whether we are working on current projects or starting new ones, you always get clear and accessible information. This tool is a big help in achieving that.
+A big advantage of Material for MkDocs is how it helps us keep a consistent style across all our documentation, as we are more efficient when writing documentation and can reuse the configuration, style sheets and quality checkers.
 
 ## New Features
 
-- Switch between dark and light mode
+- Enable switching between dark and light mode
 - News are managed with the `blog` feature and appear more prominently in the navigation bar
 - Table of Content now visible for each site on the right side bar
 - Clear distinction between internal and external hyperlinks
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 ## Your Thoughts Matter
 
-Your feedback is crucial for us as we continue to improve. If you have any suggestions or thoughts on the new design, we would love to hear from you.
+Your feedback is crucial for us as we continue to improve. Please let us know if you have any suggestions or thoughts on the new design.