Merge pull request #45 from heavygabriel/master

Fixed a bunch of typos and reworded some sentences.

README.md

@@ -1,51 +1,53 @@
 # CommanderPi
 <img src="https://i.imgur.com/qKibLTt.png"></img></br>
-Easy RaspberryPi4 GUI system managment</br>
+Easy Raspberry Pi 4 GUI system manager.</br>
 #### Included in TwisterOS!</br>
 ### <a href="https://raspbian-x.com/">>PiLAB project<</a>
-### Requiments
-Nothing, every Linux distrubiton has a python interpreter!
+### Requirements
+Nothing, every Linux distribution has a Python interpreter!
 ## Features
--Check your system information like CPU temperature, CPU usage, kernel version etc by user friendly menu </br>
+-Check your system information (CPU temperature, CPU usage, Kernel version,etc) with an user friendly menu.</br>
 -Easy overclocking! </br>
--Check actually bootloader configuration and setup your own!</br>
--Switch between 64bit and 32bit kernel! (EXPERIMENTAL)</br>
+-Checks the actual bootloader configuration and setup your own!</br>
+-Switch between the 64bit and 32bit Linux Kernel! (EXPERIMENTAL)</br>
 <img src="https://i.imgur.com/fSOGsL4.png"></img></br>
 <img src="https://i.imgur.com/jCULp4U.png"></img></br>
-## Download
+## To download the software.
 https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Ym5pdf4-0bTj-uxYpsU0AYnIosziTbYq/view?usp=sharing
-## Update
--You must have version min 0.4.5 (if you don't use download and reinstall app)</br>
--Use `Update application` button in About window
+##  Steps to update the software.
+-CommanderPi must be version 0.4.5+ to update. ( If your version of CommanderPi doesn't fulfill those requirements, you should 
+download the newest version and reinstall it.)</br>
+
+-Press the `Update application` button in the About window.
 ### USAGE: </br>
 (first make install executable! `sudo chmod +x install.sh` )</br>
  Then install it with `./install.sh`</br>
 * **OVERCLOCKING**
-1. Go to Overclocking menu
-1. Set arm_freq
-1. Set gpu_freq
-1. Set over_voltage
+1. Go to the Overclocking menu.
+1. Set the arm_freq.
+1. Set the gpu_freq.
+1. Set the over_voltage.
 1. **CLICK BOTTOM BUTTON TO RESTART RPI!**
-1. Enjoy that!
+1. Enjoy your new overclock!
 * **EEPROM/BOOTLOADER**
-1. Go to Bootloader menu
-1. Set <b>all</b> values
-1. Click 'Apply and save' to apply your own config
-1. Restart Pi
+1. Go to the Bootloader menu.
+1. Select "Set <b>all</b> values."
+1. Click 'Apply and save' to apply your own configuration.
+1. Restart your Raspberry Pi.
 </br>
 
 ## Version history </br>
-Change log <a href="https://github.com/Jack477/CommanderPi/blob/master/CHANGELOG.md">click here</a>
+To see the version history, <a href="https://github.com/Jack477/CommanderPi/blob/master/CHANGELOG.md">click here.</a>
 </br>
 
 ### TODO
-- [x] system basic informations
-- [x] overclock
-- [x] eeprom
-- [x] network
-- [x] automaticly updates
+- [x] Basic system informations.
+- [x] Overclock.
+- [x] EEPROM.
+- [x] Network.
+- [x] Automatic updater.
 
 ## Support me
 All my work is provided for free, I'm doing stuff from fans for fans and learning by this too, improving TwisterOS.</br>
-I'm student, next year I'm going to Institute of Technology. If you like my work you can support me, thank you!
+I'm a student, Next year, I'm going to the Institute of Technology. If you like my work, you can support me. Thanks you!
 https://www.paypal.com/paypalme/jack47legos

src/gui.py

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
 home_path = sys.argv[1]
 def change_theme(master):
 	if int(th.color_mode)==0:
-		print("Setting color theme to 1")
+		print("Setting color theme to 1.")
 		th.color_mode=1
 	else:
 		th.color_mode=0
@@ -178,13 +178,13 @@ def __init__(master):
 		#separator = ttk.Separator(mainframe, orient='horizontal')
 		#separator.pack(fill=X, expand=True, pady=5)
 
-		link = tk.Label( mainframe, text="Official bootloader documentation", cursor="hand2", fg="#1D81DA")
+		link = tk.Label( mainframe, text="Official bootloader documentation.", cursor="hand2", fg="#1D81DA")
 		link.pack(fill=X)
 		mlink = 'https://www.raspberrypi.org/documentation/hardware/raspberrypi/bcm2711_bootloader_config.md'
 		link.bind("<Button-1>", lambda e: rs.cpi_open_url(mlink))
 
 
-		bind_label = tk.Label( mainframe, text="Press [Esc] to close", font=("TkDefaultFont", 11, "bold") )
+		bind_label = tk.Label( mainframe, text="Press [Esc] to close.", font=("TkDefaultFont", 11, "bold") )
 		bind_label.pack(side=BOTTOM)
 		master.bind('<Escape>', lambda e:killwindow(e, master))
 
@@ -290,7 +290,7 @@ def push_config():
 					btl.set_bootloader_value("NET_BOOT_MAX_RETRIES", NET_BOOT_MAX_RETRIES_entry.get())
 					btl.write_bootloader()
 					on_Window_Close(master)
-					msb.showinfo(title="", message="Now you need to reboot")
+					msb.showinfo(title="", message="Now you need to reboot.")
 					#rs.reboot()
 		def cancel():
 			importlib.reload(rs)
@@ -455,15 +455,15 @@ def overclock_push(entry_stuff, state):
 					if (int(entry_instance) >= 0) and (int(entry_instance) <= 16):
 						rs.set_push_state(state)
 						entry_stuff.config(state='disabled')
-						print("Its a number so it works!")
+						print("It's a number so it works!")
 					else:
-						print("Overvoltage can be beetwen 0-16")
+						print("Overvoltage can be between 0-16.")
 				else:
 					rs.set_push_state(state)
 					entry_stuff.config(state='disabled')
-					print("Its a number so it works!")
+					print("It's a number so it works!")
 			else:
-				print("Its not a number!")
+				print("It's not a number!")
 
 		def confirum_push():
 			print(rs.push_state1)
@@ -478,7 +478,7 @@ def confirum_push():
 					print("It works!")
 					rs.reboot()
 				else:
-					msb.showinfo(title="Warning", message="You don't set all values!")
+					msb.showinfo(title="Warning", message="You didn't set all values!")
 			else:
 				importlib.reload(rs)
 				on_Window_Close(master)
@@ -496,7 +496,7 @@ def set_default():
 
 		th.set_theme(master)	
 		master.protocol("WM_DELETE_WINDOW", lambda:on_Window_Close(master))	
-		msb.showwarning(title="Warning", message="Overclocking is only for advanced users!\nDo it on your own risk!")	
+		msb.showwarning(title="Warning", message="Overclocking is only for advanced users!\nDo it at your own risk!")	
 		master.mainloop()
 
 class About_Window:
@@ -553,7 +553,7 @@ def update_x():
 			up.update_cpi()
 
 
-		bind_label = tk.Label( mainframe, text="Press [Esc] to close", font=("TkDefaultFont", 11, "bold") )
+		bind_label = tk.Label( mainframe, text="Press [Esc] to close.", font=("TkDefaultFont", 11, "bold") )
 		bind_label.pack(side=BOTTOM)
 		master.bind('<Escape>', lambda e:killwindow(e, master))
 		th.set_theme(master)
@@ -717,7 +717,7 @@ def refresh():
 		btn3.pack(side=BOTTOM, pady=5)
 
 		def switch_turbo():
-			confirm_msgb = msb.askyesno(title=None, message="Forces turbo mode frequencies even when the ARM cores are not busy.\n Over voltage will be set to 6. System will restart.\n Are you sure?")
+			confirm_msgb = msb.askyesno(title=None, message="Forces turbo mode frequencies even when the ARM cores are idle.\n Over voltage will be set to 6. System will restart.\n Are you sure?")
 			if confirm_msgb == True:
 				rs.set_force_turbo()
 				rs.reboot()			

src/resources.py

@@ -227,7 +227,7 @@ def get_board_version():
 elif path.exists("/media/pi/boot/config.txt"):
 	config_path = "/media/pi/boot/config.txt"
 else:
-	print("Can't find RaspberryPi config file!")
+	print("Can't find the Raspberry Pi config file!")
 print(config_path)
 
 gpu_freq = "400" #default
@@ -276,15 +276,15 @@ def get_force_turbo():
 		return "ON"
 	else:
 		return "OFF"
-### CHECK IF OVERVOLTAGE EXIST!!!
+### CHECK IF OVERVOLTAGE EXISTS!!!
 def set_force_turbo():
 	global force_turboexist
 	global oexist
 	print(oexist)
 	print(force_turboexist)
 	force_turbo_new = ""
 	if force_turboexist and oexist:
-		print("FORCE TURBO EXIST")
+		print("FORCE TURBO EXISTS")
 		fin = open(config_path, "rt")
 		data = fin.read()
 		if "force_turbo=0" in force_turbo:

src/update.py

@@ -55,11 +55,11 @@ def check_update():
 				if "app_version =" in line:
 					xversion=line
 			if rs.app_version[:-1] in xversion:
-				print("It works bc it's same version!")
+				print("It works because it's same version!")
 			else:
-				msb.showinfo(title=None, message="Update is available!")
+				msb.showinfo(title=None, message="An update is available!")
 			print(rs.app_version)
 			print(xversion)
 	else:
-		print("Network is disconnected")
+		print("Network is disconnected.")