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OpenPEPPOL · Dec 11, 2023 · 630beb7 · 630beb7
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diff --git a/src/eusr/docs/bis/doc-section/2busproc/parties.adoc b/src/eusr/docs/bis/doc-section/2busproc/parties.adoc
@@ -10,8 +10,8 @@ Each SP will:
 
 * Collect relevant data, taking care of the accuracy and validity of this data.
 * Report this data in accordance to this document in a standardized and structured dataset. 
-* Ensure all data for a Reporting Period is reported within the Statistics Report Submitting Period following the end of the Reporting Period.
-  Note: the Reporting Period is defined by the PCA in a separate document.
+* Ensure all data for a Reporting Period is reported within the Statistics Report Submitting Period following the end of the Reporting Period. +
+  Note: the Reporting Period and Statistics Report Submitting Period are defined by the PCA in a separate document.
 * Transmit the Peppol End User Statistics Reporting document to the PCA in accordance with this specification.
 
 == OpenPeppol Operating Office (OO)

diff --git a/src/tsr/docs/bis/doc-section/1intro/audience.adoc b/src/tsr/docs/bis/doc-section/1intro/audience.adoc
@@ -4,4 +4,4 @@
 ** How the PCA will receive the reports.
 
 * Service Provider (SP)
-** How SPs are to submit their Transaction statistics Reports to the PCA.
+** How SPs are to submit their Transaction Statistics Reports to the PCA.
diff --git a/src/tsr/docs/bis/doc-section/2busproc/parties.adoc b/src/tsr/docs/bis/doc-section/2busproc/parties.adoc
@@ -10,8 +10,8 @@ Each SP will:
 
 * Collect relevant data, taking care of the accuracy and validity of this data.
 * Report this data in accordance to this specification in a standardized and structured dataset. 
-* Ensure all data for a Reporting Period is reported within the Statistics Report Submitting Period following the end of the Reporting Period.
-  Note: the Reporting Period is defined by OpenPeppol in a separate document.
+* Ensure all data for a Reporting Period is reported within the Statistics Report Submitting Period following the end of the Reporting Period. +
+  Note: the Reporting Period and the Statistics Report Submitting Period are defined by OpenPeppol in a separate document.
 * Transmit the Peppol Transaction Statistics Report document to the PCA in accordance with this specification.
 
 == OpenPeppol Operating Office (OO)

diff --git a/src/tsr/docs/bis/doc-section/2busproc/process.adoc b/src/tsr/docs/bis/doc-section/2busproc/process.adoc
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ image::./images/tsr-process-view.png[]
 * Data
 ** Only Service Providers operating a production Peppol Access Point MUST gather this data and transmit a Transaction Statistics Report.
 ** Only data for the production network MUST be gathered.
-** According to the Internal Regulations (IR), chapter 4.4, the following information elements need to be gathered for each exchanged Dataset:
+** The following information elements need to be gathered for each exchanged Dataset:
     1. Timing of the exchange
     2. Direction of the exchange (incoming or outgoing)
     3. Sending Peppol Service Provider
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ image::./images/tsr-process-view.png[]
     5. Peppol Dataset Type (Document Type ID)
     6. Transport protocol used
     7. Country of sender^*^
-    8. Country of receiver^*^
+    8. Country of receiver^**^
 
 ** Only Dataset exchanges that resulted in a positive transport level
    acknowledgment (like AS4 Receipts) MUST be included in the Transaction
@@ -40,6 +40,8 @@ image::./images/tsr-process-view.png[]
 
 NOTE: ^*^ The Country of sender will be mandatory, once the backing eDEC specification becomes mandatory
 
+NOTE: ^**^ The Country of receiver can only be determined by the receiving Service Provider (C3)
+
 
 == Data Aggregation