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Faculty advisor: Follow style guide, reorganize / restructure content #41

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@jwflory jwflory commented Mar 24, 2018

This PR addresses the faculty advisor page. There weren't many content changes in this one. Specifically, this PR changes the following:

  • Follow style guide for Sphinx-based docs
  • Avoid passive voice / improve readability score
  • Reorganize section on changing faculty advisors

Rendered preview of updated faculty advisor page


Tagging RITlug/tasks#8 for tracking purposes.

@jwflory jwflory added enhancement Improvements or changes to pre-existing document(s) doc: Administration Affects content in Administration category labels Mar 24, 2018
@jwflory jwflory self-assigned this Mar 24, 2018
@jwflory jwflory requested a review from a team March 24, 2018 18:57
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Looks great! There is one sentence with odd wording that needs to be addressed.

Periodically, the adviser may be needed to resolve issues with the clubs office or with renewing club resources.
Faculty advisors can take a hands-on or hands-off role.
Historically, RITlug's advisor is hands-off.
This assumes the club is in good standing is regular communication with the advisor.
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Wording is odd with this sentence.

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@Tjzabel Oops, nice catch. I just pushed a new commit to clean this up.

@jwflory jwflory dismissed Tjzabel’s stale review March 24, 2018 19:43

New commit addresses concern in review; please re-review

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Looks good. Thanks for changing ^.^

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I think that covers everything we did with SJ.

@Serubin Serubin merged commit 7742f1a into master Mar 25, 2018
@jwflory jwflory deleted the improve/faculty-advisor branch March 25, 2018 15:37
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