Fixed editorial feedback.

SUSE · Dec 19, 2024 · d03e44e · d03e44e
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diff --git a/articles/SLES-networkmanager-nmcli.asm.xml b/articles/SLES-networkmanager-nmcli.asm.xml
@@ -121,9 +121,9 @@
       <meta name="productname" its:translate="no">
         <productname version="16.0" os="sles">&productname;</productname>
       </meta>
-      <meta name="title" its:translate="yes">Setting up and managing &nm;</meta>
-      <meta name="description" its:translate="yes">An overview of setting up &nm;</meta>
-      <meta name="social-descr" its:translate="yes">Set up &nm;</meta>
+      <meta name="title" its:translate="yes">Setting Up and Managing &nm;</meta>
+      <meta name="description" its:translate="yes">Configure, manage and monitor network connections with &nm;</meta>
+      <meta name="social-descr" its:translate="yes">Setting up and managing &nm;</meta>
       <!-- suitable categories -->
       <meta name="category" its:translate="no">
         <phrase>Network</phrase>
@@ -177,7 +177,7 @@
         </varlistentry>
         <varlistentry>
           <term>REQUIREMENTS</term>
-           <listitem><para>Root access to install and manage &nm;. Package manager to install &nm;.</para></listitem>
+           <listitem><para>Root access to install and manage &nm;. A Package manager to install &nm;.</para></listitem>
         </varlistentry>
       </variablelist>
       </abstract>