Final planet description updates

data/map planets.txt

@@ -247,7 +247,7 @@ planet Taltahard
 	landscape land/taltahard
 	description `The small moon of Taltahard is much like many moons, save the single fact that iron ore can be found in great quantities. Additionally, large reserves of deuterium, which is used to make hyperspace fuel, have been found here. However, all food must be shipped in from outside.`
 	description `	The system Taltahard is in was the last of the five Jibauni systems to be discovered. A captain on Landalmon had sensed it soon after the discovery of Hajay with the rudimentary technology the Jibauni then had. However, it was a captain on Baitoon who first jumped into it, and so he has the credit for discovering it.`
-	spaceport `There are few places in Jibauni space you have seen that have so many Nathars and Nathases around, but few passenger transports are evident. Only large landing pads dot the site, and the main amenity is the fuel - which just so happens to be in great tanks without automatic fuel connectors.`
+	spaceport `There are few places in Jibauni space you have seen that have so many Nathaqs and Nathases around, but few passenger transports are evident. Only large landing pads dot the site, and the main amenity is the fuel - which just so happens to be in great tanks without automatic fuel connectors.`
 	government Jibauni
 	outfitter "Jibauni Basics"
 	tribute 2000
@@ -258,20 +258,21 @@ planet Taltahard
 planet "Tud Habal"
 	attributes uninhabited
 	landscape "land/tud habal"
-	description `Tud Habal has no atmosphere, and it is a miracle that the sparse vegetation has survived. The land is dotted with lone mountains, covered with some sort of rock that moves. You can only guess what it might be called, if any sentient being lived here, but it is unlikely that the name would be pleasant.`
+	description `Without an atmosphere to thrive on, it is a miracle that the sparse vegetation on Tud Habal survives. Not a single plant from Earth could live here, and indeed, it would be hard to find greenery hardy enough to survive. The land is dotted with lone mountains, covered with rock that moves and leaps with hostile intent toward intruders. You can only guess what the spooky stone might be called if any sentient being lived here, but it is unlikely that the name would be pleasant.`
 
 planet Vardelu
 	attributes uninhabited
 	landscape land/vardelu
-	description `A green planet with beautiful clouds, Vardelu is peaceful and aesthetic. Yet all is not as idollic as it seems. Innocent-looking clouds conceal deadly birds of prey, and exiting a spaceship brings great flocks of predators down upon anybody who dares set foot on the world.`
+	description `Vardelu, covered with a thick atmosphere and beautiful clouds, appears peaceful and aesthetic. Yet all is not idollic. Innocent-looking clouds conceal deadly black birds of prey, and exiting a spaceship brings great flocks of the predators down upon anybody who dares set foot on the world.`
+	description `	It doesn't help that the hard grass bounces travelers sky-high - right into the middle of the bird clouds, who would like nothing better than to murder any trespassers.`
 
 planet Weloon
 	attributes uninhabited
 	landscape land/hills6-sfiera
-	description `Weloon is quite cloudy, and the yellow slopes underneath the rolling fog are covered in light wisps of some unknown plant native to this planet. Mountains loom in the distance, and the much nearer trees are blotted dark against them.`
+	description `Yellow slopes underneath clouds and rolling fog dominate the small trees on Weloon. Mountains dwarf the hills, covered with light wisps of some unkown plant native to this cold planet. Trees, visible but hue-shifting, dot the nearer sides of the mesas at the top of the world, while on the other side a long fall awaits those who step too far.`
 
 planet Zilat
 	attributes uninhabited
 	landscape land/zilat
-	description `Nothing of interest resides on this abandoned planet. Its closeness to Jibauni space suggests that it may once have been inhabited, but if so, no indications remain; the planet looks remarkably free from intervention of any sentient being.`
+	description `Nothing of interest resides on this abandoned planet. Zilat's nearness to Jibauni space suggests it may once have been inhabited, but if so, no indications remain; the planet looks remarkably free from intervention of any sentient being.`
 	description `	At your landing location, a lone yellow rock formation stands, the only splotch of different color in miles of red rock.`