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doc/content/devices/models/seeed-E5/_index.md

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ The [Seeed Studio Wio-E5 module](https://www.seeedstudio.com/LoRa-LoRaWAN-Module
 
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-We will be using the Wio-E5 mini for this guide, but the process should be the same for the other boards.
+We will be using the Wio-E5 mini for this guide, but the process should be the same for the other Wio-E5 boards.
 
 ## AT Commands
 
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ In the serial monitor's message field, type `AT` and press enter. You should see
 
 {{< figure src="AT.png" alt="Arduino's serial console with the AT command responding." >}}
 
-Now move to {{% tts %}} Console, create an application and click **Register end device**. Check [Adding Devices](https://www.thethingsindustries.com/docs/devices/adding-devices/) for more info.
+Now we have to create a device on {{% tts %}} first before continuing.
 
 ## Onboarding to {{% tts %}}
 
@@ -32,17 +32,17 @@ The [LoRaWAN® Device repository](https://github.com/TheThingsNetwork/lorawan-de
 
 To onboard with the **Device Repository**, in the **End device type** section, under **Input method**, select the **Select the end device in the LoRaWAN Device Repository** option. The [Onboarding devices without QR codes]({{< ref "/devices/adding-devices/#onboarding-devices-without-qr-codes" >}}) section of the [Adding Devices]({{< ref "/devices/adding-devices/" >}}) guide explains this procedure in detail. Following details are Wio-E5 mini-specific:
 
-- **End device brand:** Seeed Technology Co., Ltd
-- **Model:** Wio-E5 mini (STM32WLE5JC) Dev Board
-- **Hardware Ver.:** `1.0`
-- **Firmware Ver.:** `1.0`
+- End device brand: **Seeed Technology Co., Ltd**
+- Model: **Wio-E5 mini (STM32WLE5JC) Dev Board**
+- Hardware Ver.: `1.0`
+- Firmware Ver.: `1.0`
 
 {{< figure src="repository-onboard.png" alt="Settings for registration through device repository" >}}
 
 If you prefer onboarding **manually**, in the **End device type** section, under **Input Method**, select the **Enter end device specifics manually** option. The [Manually adding devices]({{< ref "/devices/adding-devices/manual/" >}}) and [Over the Air Activation (OTAA)]({{< ref "/devices/adding-devices/manual/otaa/" >}}) guides explain this procedure in detail. Following details are specific to the Wio-E5 mini:
 
-- **LoRaWAN version:** `LoRaWAN Specification 1.0.3`
-- **Regional parameters version:** `RP001 Regional Parameters 1.0.3 revision A`
+- LoRaWAN version: `LoRaWAN Specification 1.0.3`
+- Regional parameters version: `RP001 Regional Parameters 1.0.3 revision A`
 
 {{< figure src="manual.png" width="70%" alt="Settings for manual registration" >}}
 
@@ -60,9 +60,9 @@ Tx: AT+ID=AppEui
 Rx: +ID: AppEui, 80:00:00:00:00:00:00:07
 ```
 
-Now go back to the stack and enter the details for your device.
+Now return to {{% tts %}} and enter the details for your device.
 
-Finally we need to set the `AppKey`. To do this, click **Generate** next to the Appkey in {{% tts %}} and copy it. Then run the following AT command:
+Finally we need to set the `AppKey`. To do this, click **Generate** next to the Appkey in {{% tts %}} and **copy** it. Then run the following AT command:
 
 - `AT+KEY=APPKEY,"generated-appkey"` to set the App Key
 
@@ -88,17 +88,18 @@ AT+CH=NUM,8-15
 AT+DR=EU868
 AT+CH=NUM,0-2
 
+// After running the region command
 AT+MODE=LWOTAA
 AT+JOIN
 ```
 
 The output on serial monitor will be as follows:
 
 ```
-Tx: AT+DR=US915
-Rx: +DR: US915
-Tx: AT+CH=NUM,8-15
-Rx: +CH: NUM, 8-15
+Tx: AT+DR=EU868
+Rx: +DR: EU868
+Tx: AT+CH=NUM,0-2
+Rx: +CH: NUM, 0-2
 
 Tx: AT+MODE=LWOTAA
 Rx: +MODE: LWOTAA
@@ -113,4 +114,4 @@ Rx: +JOIN: Start
 
 If you see `+JOIN: Network joined` on your serial console, that means your device has successfully connected to {{% tts %}}!
 
-To start developing with the Wio-E5, check the [Seeed Studio Wiki](https://wiki.seeedstudio.com/LoRa_E5_mini/#develop-with-stm32cube-mcu-package).
+This only explains the basics for connecting to . If you wish to know what other commands are available, check [here](https://files.seeedstudio.com/products/317990687/res/LoRa-E5%20AT%20Command%20Specification_V1.0%20.pdf). And if you wish to start developing with the Wio-E5, check the [Seeed Studio Wiki](https://wiki.seeedstudio.com/LoRa_E5_mini/#develop-with-stm32cube-mcu-package).