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ably · Jul 21, 2023 · 77ac296 · 77ac296
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diff --git a/docs/class-definitions.md b/docs/class-definitions.md
@@ -390,7 +390,7 @@ Handles tracking of member cursors within a space. Inherits from [EventEmitter](
 
 Set the position of a cursor. This will emit a `CursorUpdate` event. If a member has not yet entered the space, this method will error.
 
-`CursorUpdate` is an object with 2 properties. `position` is an object with 2 required properties, `x` and `y`. These represent the position of the cursor on a 2D plane. A second property, `data` can passed. This is an object of any shape and is meant for data associated with the cursor movement (like drag or hover calculation results):
+A `CursorUpdate` is an object with 2 properties. `position` is an object with 2 required properties, `x` and `y`. These represent the position of the cursor on a 2D plane. A second optional property, `data` can also be passed. This is an object of any shape and is meant for data associated with the cursor movement (like drag or hover calculation results):
 
 ```ts
 type set = (update: { position: CursorPosition, data?: CursorData })
@@ -420,7 +420,7 @@ const lastPositions = space.cursors.getAll();
 
 ### on
 
-Listen to cursor update events. See [EventEmitter](/docs/usage.md#event-emitters) for overloading usage.
+Listen to `CursorUpdate` events. See [EventEmitter](/docs/usage.md#event-emitters) for overloading usage.
 
 Available events:
 

diff --git a/docs/usage.md b/docs/usage.md
@@ -297,7 +297,7 @@ The listener will be called with a `CursorUpdate`:
 }
 ```
 
-To set cursor updates, first enter the space:
+To set the position of a cursor and emit a `CursorUpdate`, first enter the space:
 
 ```ts
 space.enter();
@@ -323,7 +323,7 @@ window.addEventListner('mousemove', ({ clientX, clientY }) => {
 
 To retrieve the initial position and data of all cursors within a space, you can use the `space.cursors.getAll()` method. This returns an object keyed by `connectionId`. The value is the last `cursorUpdate` set by the given `connectionId`.
 
-Example of calling `getAll` to return all cursor positions:
+Example of calling `getAll()` to return all cursor positions:
 
 ```ts
 const lastPositions = await space.cursors.getAll();