Corrected grammer and sentence construction! (#271)

README_EN.md

@@ -7,50 +7,39 @@
 [![Downloads](https://img.shields.io/github/downloads/aistra0528/Hail/total.svg)](https://github.com/aistra0528/Hail/releases)
 [![License](https://img.shields.io/github/license/aistra0528/Hail)](LICENSE)
 
-Hail is a free-as-in-freedom software to freeze Android
-apps. [GitHub Releases](https://github.com/aistra0528/Hail/releases)
+Hail is a free-as-in-freedom software to freeze Android apps. [GitHub Releases](https://github.com/aistra0528/Hail/releases)
 
 [<img src="https://fdroid.gitlab.io/artwork/badge/get-it-on.png" alt="Get it on F-Droid" height="80">](https://f-droid.org/packages/com.aistra.hail/)
 
 <img src="fastlane/metadata/android/en-US/images/phoneScreenshots/1.png" width="32%" /> <img src="fastlane/metadata/android/en-US/images/phoneScreenshots/2.png" width="32%" /> <img src="fastlane/metadata/android/en-US/images/phoneScreenshots/3.png" width="32%" />
 
 ## Freeze
 
-Freeze is a word that describes the action of **blocking (immediately stopping) apps when they are unnecessary (
-on-demand
-request)** to use the device
-in a better way, cut down on the usage of RAM and save power. Users can also unfreeze them to revert to their original
-state.
+Freeze is a word that describes the action of **blocking (immediately stopping) apps when they are not needed/in-use (on-demand request)** which in turn helps the device to cut down on the usage of RAM and save power. Users can also unfreeze them to revert to their original state.
 
 In general, "freeze" means disable, but also Hail can "freeze" apps by hiding and suspending them.
 
 ### Disable
 
-Disabled apps will not be shown in the launcher and will be shown as "Disabled" in the installed apps list. Enable them
-to revert the action.
+Disabled apps will not be shown in the launcher and will be shown as "Disabled" in the installed apps list. Enable them to revert the action.
 
 ### Hide
 
-Hidden apps will not be shown in the launcher and installed apps list. Unhide them to revert the action.
+Hidden apps will not be shown in the launcher and in the installed apps list. Unhide them to revert the action.
 
-> While in this state, which is almost like an uninstalled state, the package will be unavailable,
-> but the application data and the actual package file will not be removed from the device.
+> While in this state, which is almost like an uninstalled state, the package will be unavailable, however, the application data and the actual package file will not be removed from the device.
 
 ### Suspend (Android 7.0+)
 
-Suspended apps will have their icons shown in a grayscale in the device's launcher. Unsuspend them to revert the action.
+Suspended apps will have their icons shown in grayscale within the device's launcher. Unsuspend them to revert the action.
 
-> While in this state, the application's notifications will be hidden, any of its started activities
-> will be stopped and it will not be able to show toasts, dialogs or even play audio. When the user tries
-> to launch a suspended app, the system will, instead, show a dialog to the user informing them that
-> they cannot use this app while it is suspended.
+> While in this state, the application's notifications will be hidden, any of its started activities will be stopped and it will not be able to show toasts, dialogs or even play audio. When the user tries to launch a suspended app, the system will, instead, show a dialog to the user informing them that they cannot use this app while it is suspended.
 
-Suspend only prevents the user from interacting with the app, it does **NOT** prevent the app from running in the
-background.
+Suspend only prevents the user from interacting with the app, it does **NOT** prevent the app from running in the background.
 
 ## Working mode
 
-**Any apps that have been frozen on Hail will need to be unfrozen by the same working mode.**
+**Any app that has been frozen on Hail will need to be unfrozen by the same working mode.**
 
 1. For devices supporting wireless debugging (Android 11+) or rooted devices, `Shizuku` is recommended.
 
@@ -68,7 +57,7 @@ background.
 
 ### Device Owner
 
-**You must remove device owner before uninstall**
+**You must remove Hail as a device owner before you can uninstall it**
 
 #### Set device owner by adb
 
@@ -85,8 +74,7 @@ adb shell dpm set-device-owner com.aistra.hail/.receiver.DeviceAdminReceiver
 In response, adb prints this message if device owner has been successfully set:
 
 ```
-Success: Device owner set to package com.aistra.hail
-Active admin set to component {com.aistra.hail/com.aistra.hail.receiver.DeviceAdminReceiver}
+Success: Device owner set to package com.aistra.hail. Active admin set to component {com.aistra.hail/com.aistra.hail.receiver.DeviceAdminReceiver}
 ```
 
 Search the message by search engine otherwise.
@@ -154,8 +142,7 @@ adb shell pm unsuspend com.package.name
 
 ### Modify file
 
-Access `/data/system/users/0/package-restrictions.xml`, this file stores the restrictions about
-apps. You can modify, rename or just delete it.
+Access `/data/system/users/0/package-restrictions.xml`, this file stores the restrictions about apps. You can modify, rename or just delete it.
 
 - Enable app: Modify the value of `enabled` from 2 (DISABLED) or 3 (DISABLED_USER) to 1 (ENABLED)
 
@@ -175,39 +162,31 @@ adb shell am start -a action -e key value
 
 `action` can be one of the following constants:
 
-- `com.aistra.hail.action.LAUNCH`: Unfreeze and launch target app. If it is unfrozen, it will launch
-  directly. `key="package"` `value="com.package.name"`
+- `com.aistra.hail.action.LAUNCH`: Unfreeze and launch target app. If it is unfrozen, it will launch directly. `key="package"` `value="com.package.name"`
 
-- `com.aistra.hail.action.FREEZE`: Freeze target app. It must be checked at
-  Home. `key="package"` `value="com.package.name"`
+- `com.aistra.hail.action.FREEZE`: Freeze target app. It must be checked at Home. `key="package"` `value="com.package.name"`
 
-- `com.aistra.hail.action.UNFREEZE`: Unfreeze target
-  app. `key="package"` `value="com.package.name"`
+- `com.aistra.hail.action.UNFREEZE`: Unfreeze target app. `key="package"` `value="com.package.name"`
 
-- `com.aistra.hail.action.FREEZE_TAG`: Freeze all non-whitelisted apps in the target
-  tag. `key="tag"` `value="Tag name"`
+- `com.aistra.hail.action.FREEZE_TAG`: Freeze all non-whitelisted apps in the target tag. `key="tag"` `value="Tag name"`
 
-- `com.aistra.hail.action.UNFREEZE_TAG`: Unfreeze all apps in the target
-  tag. `key="tag"` `value="Tag name"`
+- `com.aistra.hail.action.UNFREEZE_TAG`: Unfreeze all apps in the target tag. `key="tag"` `value="Tag name"`
 
 - `com.aistra.hail.action.FREEZE_ALL`: Freeze all apps at Home. `extra` is not necessary.
 
 - `com.aistra.hail.action.UNFREEZE_ALL`: Unfreeze all apps at Home. `extra` is not necessary.
 
-- `com.aistra.hail.action.FREEZE_NON_WHITELISTED`: Freeze all non-whitelisted apps at Home. `extra`
-  is not necessary.
+- `com.aistra.hail.action.FREEZE_NON_WHITELISTED`: Freeze all non-whitelisted apps at Home. `extra` is not necessary.
 
 - `com.aistra.hail.action.FREEZE_AUTO`: Auto freeze apps at Home. `extra` is not necessary.
 
 - `com.aistra.hail.action.LOCK`: Lock screen. `extra` is not necessary.
 
-- `com.aistra.hail.action.LOCK_FREEZE`: Freeze all apps at Home and lock screen. `extra` is not
-  necessary.
+- `com.aistra.hail.action.LOCK_FREEZE`: Freeze all apps at Home and lock screen. `extra` is not necessary.
 
 ## Help Translate
 
-To translate Hail into your language, or to improve an existing translation,
-use [Weblate](https://hosted.weblate.org/engage/hail/).
+To translate Hail into your language, or to improve an existing translation, use [Weblate](https://hosted.weblate.org/engage/hail/).
 
 [![Translation status](https://hosted.weblate.org/widgets/hail/-/multi-auto.svg)](https://hosted.weblate.org/engage/hail/)
 
@@ -217,7 +196,7 @@ use [Weblate](https://hosted.weblate.org/engage/hail/).
     Copyright (C) 2021-2024 Aistra
     Copyright (C) 2022-2024 Hail contributors
 
-    This program is free software: you can redistribute it and/or modify
+    This program is a free software: you can redistribute it and/or modify
     it under the terms of the GNU General Public License as published by
     the Free Software Foundation, either version 3 of the License, or
     (at your option) any later version.