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Alex Bowyer edited this page Nov 6, 2021
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- Rewrite intro paragraphs to match thesis convention
- Restructure and rewrite background so as to reference and build on lit review rather than duplicate anything.
- Insert images for all figures (and tables)?
- rewrite the context section so it feels less papery
- rewrite the gdpr requests section so it feels less papery
- Add theme 1 subthemes table
- Add theme 2 subthemes table
- Add theme 3 subthemes table
- rewrite Summation to make it more papery; specifically it needs to show how the insights advance the research questions.
- rewrite Discussion 1 to make it less papery
- rewrite Discussion 2 to make it less papery
- rewrite Discussion 3 to make it less papery
- remove all 'we' and 'our'
- restructure findings to avoid duplications as a precursor to rewording.
- rewrite findings 1 section to make it my own words
- rewrite findings 2 section to make it my own words
- rewrite findings 3 section to make it my own words
- de-anonymise table 11
- fix theme intro bit
- sort out all references throughout paper