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snapraid.1

@@ -68,42 +68,39 @@ snapraid [\-V, \-\-version] [\-H, \-\-help] [\-C, \-\-gen\-conf CONTENT]
 .PP
 .PD
 .SH DESCRIPTION 
-SnapRAID is a backup program for disk arrays. It stores parity
-information of your data and it recovers from up to six disk
-failures.
+SnapRAID is a backup program designed for disk arrays, storing
+parity information for data recovery in the event of up to six
+disk failures.
 .PP
-SnapRAID is mainly targeted for a home media center, with a lot of
-big files that rarely change.
-.PP
-Beside the ability to recover from disk failures, other
-features of SnapRAID are:
+Primarily intended for home media centers with large,
+infrequently changing files, SnapRAID offers several features:
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 .IP \(bu
-You can use disk already filled with files, without the need to
-reformat them. You will access them like now.
+You can utilize disks already filled with files without the
+need to reformat them, accessing them as usual.
 .IP \(bu
-All your data is hashed to ensure data integrity and to avoid
+All your data is hashed to ensure data integrity and prevent
 silent corruption.
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-If the failed disks are too many to allow a recovery,
-you lose the data only on the failed disks.
-All the data in the other disks is safe.
+When the number of failed disks exceeds the parity count,
+data loss is confined to the affected disks; data on
+other disks remains accessible.
 .IP \(bu
-If you accidentally delete some files in a disk, you can
-recover them.
+If you accidentally delete files on a disk, recovery is
+possible.
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-The disks can have different sizes.
+Disks can have different sizes.
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 You can add disks at any time.
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-It doesn\'t lock\-in your data. You can stop using SnapRAID at any
-time without the need to reformat or move data.
+SnapRAID doesn\'t lock in your data; you can stop using it
+anytime without reformatting or moving data.
 .IP \(bu
-To access a file, only a single disk needs to spin, saving power and
-producing less noise.
+To access a file, only a single disk needs to spin, saving
+power and reducing noise.
 .PD
 .PP
-The official site of SnapRAID is:
+For more information, please visit the official SnapRAID site:
 .PP
 .RS 4
 http://www.snapraid.it/

snapraid.d

@@ -21,33 +21,30 @@ Synopsis
 	:snapraid [-V, --version] [-H, --help] [-C, --gen-conf CONTENT]
 
 Description
-	SnapRAID is a backup program for disk arrays. It stores parity
-	information of your data and it recovers from up to six disk
-	failures.
+	SnapRAID is a backup program designed for disk arrays, storing
+	parity information for data recovery in the event of up to six
+	disk failures.
 
-	SnapRAID is mainly targeted for a home media center, with a lot of
-	big files that rarely change.
+	Primarily intended for home media centers with large,
+	infrequently changing files, SnapRAID offers several features:
 
-	Beside the ability to recover from disk failures, other
-	features of SnapRAID are:
-
-	* You can use disk already filled with files, without the need to
-		reformat them. You will access them like now.
-	* All your data is hashed to ensure data integrity and to avoid
+	* You can utilize disks already filled with files without the
+		need to reformat them, accessing them as usual.
+	* All your data is hashed to ensure data integrity and prevent
 		silent corruption.
-	* If the failed disks are too many to allow a recovery,
-		you lose the data only on the failed disks.
-		All the data in the other disks is safe.
-	* If you accidentally delete some files in a disk, you can
-		recover them.
-	* The disks can have different sizes.
+	* When the number of failed disks exceeds the parity count,
+		data loss is confined to the affected disks; data on
+		other disks remains accessible.
+	* If you accidentally delete files on a disk, recovery is
+		possible.
+	* Disks can have different sizes.
 	* You can add disks at any time.
-	* It doesn't lock-in your data. You can stop using SnapRAID at any
-		time without the need to reformat or move data.
-	* To access a file, only a single disk needs to spin, saving power and
-		producing less noise.
+	* SnapRAID doesn't lock in your data; you can stop using it
+		anytime without reformatting or moving data.
+	* To access a file, only a single disk needs to spin, saving
+		power and reducing noise.
 
-	The official site of SnapRAID is:
+	For more information, please visit the official SnapRAID site:
 
 		:http://www.snapraid.it/
 

snapraid.txt

@@ -28,33 +28,30 @@ snapraid [-V, --version] [-H, --help] [-C, --gen-conf CONTENT]
 2 DESCRIPTION
 =============
 
-SnapRAID is a backup program for disk arrays. It stores parity
-information of your data and it recovers from up to six disk
-failures.
+SnapRAID is a backup program designed for disk arrays, storing
+parity information for data recovery in the event of up to six
+disk failures.
 
-SnapRAID is mainly targeted for a home media center, with a lot of
-big files that rarely change.
+Primarily intended for home media centers with large,
+infrequently changing files, SnapRAID offers several features:
 
-Beside the ability to recover from disk failures, other
-features of SnapRAID are:
-
-* You can use disk already filled with files, without the need to
-  reformat them. You will access them like now.
-* All your data is hashed to ensure data integrity and to avoid
+* You can utilize disks already filled with files without the
+  need to reformat them, accessing them as usual.
+* All your data is hashed to ensure data integrity and prevent
   silent corruption.
-* If the failed disks are too many to allow a recovery,
-  you lose the data only on the failed disks.
-  All the data in the other disks is safe.
-* If you accidentally delete some files in a disk, you can
-  recover them.
-* The disks can have different sizes.
+* When the number of failed disks exceeds the parity count,
+  data loss is confined to the affected disks; data on
+  other disks remains accessible.
+* If you accidentally delete files on a disk, recovery is
+  possible.
+* Disks can have different sizes.
 * You can add disks at any time.
-* It doesn't lock-in your data. You can stop using SnapRAID at any
-  time without the need to reformat or move data.
-* To access a file, only a single disk needs to spin, saving power and
-  producing less noise.
+* SnapRAID doesn't lock in your data; you can stop using it
+  anytime without reformatting or moving data.
+* To access a file, only a single disk needs to spin, saving
+  power and reducing noise.
 
-The official site of SnapRAID is:
+For more information, please visit the official SnapRAID site:
 
     http://www.snapraid.it/