Grammar and cleanup on funding page

contributing/funding.md

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ addons:
 <h2>What Bugzilla Spends Money On</h2>
 
 <p>All monetary amounts listed on this page are in US Dollars (USD).</p>
-<p>Amounts last updated 2023/11/06.</p>
+<p>Amounts last updated 2023/11/08.</p>
 
 <h3>One Time Expenses</h3>
 
@@ -68,19 +68,9 @@ $265)) paid before we had a way to collect donations.</li>
 <span class="fundprogressbar_total">$55</span>
 </div>
 
-<p><b>Recurring donations which exceed the above goal will be credited towards the
-permanent developer fund below, the balance at the end of each month being paid to 
-the one-time payoff fund until it is paid off.</b> <strike>If monthly expenses come
-due and not enough is in the Ongoing Necessary Expenses fund, the balance
-will be deducted from the One Time Expenses fund.</strike></p>
-
-<p>
-<a href="https://github.com/sponsors/bugzilla" class="button primary">Sponsor Us</a> with a monthly contribution towards this goal at GitHub Sponsors (GitHub account required).
-<p>
-
-<p>
-<a href="https://liberapay.com/bugzilla/" class="button primary">Sponsor Us</a> with a monthly contribution towards this goal at Liberapay using any payment type Stripe will accept (credit, debit, etc). Stripe will deduct 2.9% + 30¢ from your contribution each month as a transaction fee.
-<p>
+<p><b>This goal has been met! Thank you!</b></p>
+<p>Additional recurring donations are still needed for the Permanent developer
+fund (scroll down).</p>
 
 <h3>Ongoing "Nice to have" expenses</h3>
 
@@ -102,10 +92,11 @@ exceeding the above goals:</p>
 <p>Our pie-in-the-sky goal right now is to have a permanent part-time developer
 to work around 20 hours per per week on Bugzilla on whatever needs doing, and
 not just one-off projects. To do this, we anticipate needing about $4000 per
-month in recurring donations. Until this one-time expenses goal is met, the 
-balance at the end of each month will be contributed to that fund. After that,
-it will be contributed to the general project fund each month. Once this goal 
-is hit, then a developer will be hired, instead.</p>
+month in recurring donations. <b>Until the one-time expenses goal is met, 
+the balance of this fund at the end of each month will be contributed to that 
+fund.</b> After that, it will be contributed to the general project fund each 
+month. Once the permenant developer goal is hit, then a developer will be 
+hired, instead.</p>
 
 <p>Single-month recurring donations exceeding the above necessary expenses:</p>