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cockroachdb · Jan 26, 2024 · c5416cd · c5416cd
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diff --git a/src/current/_data/releases.yml b/src/current/_data/releases.yml
@@ -5385,10 +5385,10 @@
   release_date: '2024-01-17'
   release_type: Production
   cloud_only: true
-  cloud_only_message_short: 'Available in CockroachDB Dedicated. Self-hosted binaries <a href="https://www.cockroachlabs.com/docs/releases/v23.2#v23-2-0">available February 5</a> as per the <a href="https://www.cockroachlabs.com/docs/releases/staged-release-process">staged release process</a>.'
+  cloud_only_message_short: 'Available in CockroachDB Dedicated. Self-hosted binaries <a href="https://www.cockroachlabs.com/docs/releases/v23.2#v23-2-0">available February 5</a> per the <a href="https://www.cockroachlabs.com/docs/releases/staged-release-process">staged release process</a>.'
   cloud_only_message: >
     CockroachDB v23.2 is now generally available for CockroachDB Dedicated,
-    and is scheduled to be made available for CockroachDB Self-Hosted on February 5, 2024 as per the <a href="https://www.cockroachlabs.com/docs/releases/staged-release-process">staged release process</a>.
+    and is scheduled to be made available for CockroachDB Self-Hosted on February 5, 2024 per the <a href="https://www.cockroachlabs.com/docs/releases/staged-release-process">staged release process</a>.
     For more information, refer to
     <a href="https://www.cockroachlabs.com/docs/cockroachcloud/create-your-cluster">Create a CockroachDB Dedicated Cluster</a> or
     <a href="https://www.cockroachlabs.com/docs/cockroachcloud/upgrade-to-v23.2">Upgrade to CockroachDB v23.2</a>.

diff --git a/src/current/releases/index.md b/src/current/releases/index.md
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ In CockroachDB v22.2.x and above, a cluster that is upgraded to an alpha binary
 
 ## Staged release process
 
-As of 2024, CockroachDB will be released under a staged delivery process. New releases will be made available for CockroachDB Cloud clusters for two weeks before binaries are published for CockroachDB Self-Hosted downloads.
+As of 2024, CockroachDB is released under a staged delivery process. New releases are made available for CockroachDB Cloud clusters for two weeks before binaries are published for CockroachDB Self-Hosted downloads.
 
 {{ experimental_js_warning }}
 

diff --git a/src/current/releases/staged-release-process.md b/src/current/releases/staged-release-process.md
@@ -5,4 +5,4 @@ toc: true
 docs_area: releases
 ---
 
-As of 2024, CockroachDB will be released under a staged delivery process. New releases will be made available for CockroachDB Cloud clusters for two weeks before binaries are published for CockroachDB Self-Hosted downloads.
+As of 2024, CockroachDB is released under a staged delivery process. New releases are made available for CockroachDB Cloud clusters for two weeks before binaries are published for CockroachDB Self-Hosted downloads.