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-CockroachDB {{ site.data.products.serverless }} clusters operate with a [different architecture](https://www.cockroachlabs.com/docs/cockroachcloud/architecture#cockroachdb-serverless) compared to CockroachDB {{ site.data.products.core }} and CockroachDB {{ site.data.products.dedicated }} clusters. These architectural differences have implications for how locality-aware backups can run. Serverless clusters will scale resources depending on whether they are actively in use, which means that it is less likely to have a SQL pod available in every locality. As a result, Serverless clusters are more likely to have ranges that do not match with any of the cluster's localities, which can lead to more ranges backed up to a storage bucket in a different locality. You should consider this as you plan a backup strategy that must comply with [data domiciling](data-domiciling.html) requirements.
+CockroachDB {{ site.data.products.serverless }} clusters operate with a [different architecture](https://www.cockroachlabs.com/docs/cockroachcloud/architecture#cockroachdb-serverless) compared to CockroachDB {{ site.data.products.core }} and CockroachDB {{ site.data.products.dedicated }} clusters. These architectural differences have implications for how locality-aware backups can run. Serverless clusters will scale resources depending on whether they are actively in use, which means that it is less likely to have a SQL pod available in every locality. As a result, your Serverless cluster may not have a SQL pod in the locality where the data resides, resulting in that data being uploaded to a storage bucket in a locality where you do have active SQL pods. You should consider this as you plan a backup strategy that must comply with [data domiciling](data-domiciling.html) requirements.

src/current/_includes/v23.1/backups/serverless-locality-aware.md

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-CockroachDB {{ site.data.products.serverless }} clusters operate with a [different architecture]({% link cockroachcloud/architecture.md %}#cockroachdb-serverless) compared to CockroachDB {{ site.data.products.core }} and CockroachDB {{ site.data.products.dedicated }} clusters. These architectural differences have implications for how locality-aware backups can run. Serverless clusters will scale resources depending on whether they are actively in use, which means that it is less likely to have a SQL pod available in every locality. As a result, Serverless clusters are more likely to have ranges that do not match with any of the cluster's localities, which can lead to more ranges backed up to a storage bucket in a different locality. You should consider this as you plan a backup strategy that must comply with [data domiciling]({% link v23.1/data-domiciling.md %}) requirements.
+CockroachDB {{ site.data.products.serverless }} clusters operate with a [different architecture]({% link cockroachcloud/architecture.md %}#cockroachdb-serverless) compared to CockroachDB {{ site.data.products.core }} and CockroachDB {{ site.data.products.dedicated }} clusters. These architectural differences have implications for how locality-aware backups can run. Serverless clusters will scale resources depending on whether they are actively in use, which means that it is less likely to have a SQL pod available in every locality. As a result, your Serverless cluster may not have a SQL pod in the locality where the data resides, resulting in that data being uploaded to a storage bucket in a locality where you do have active SQL pods. You should consider this as you plan a backup strategy that must comply with [data domiciling]({% link v23.1/data-domiciling.md %}) requirements.

src/current/_includes/v23.2/backups/serverless-locality-aware.md

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-CockroachDB {{ site.data.products.serverless }} clusters operate with a [different architecture]({% link cockroachcloud/architecture.md %}#cockroachdb-serverless) compared to CockroachDB {{ site.data.products.core }} and CockroachDB {{ site.data.products.dedicated }} clusters. These architectural differences have implications for how locality-aware backups can run. Serverless clusters will scale resources depending on whether they are actively in use, which means that it is less likely to have a SQL pod available in every locality. As a result, Serverless clusters are more likely to have ranges that do not match with any of the cluster's localities, which can lead to more ranges backed up to a storage bucket in a different locality. You should consider this as you plan a backup strategy that must comply with [data domiciling]({% link v23.2/data-domiciling.md %}) requirements.
+CockroachDB {{ site.data.products.serverless }} clusters operate with a [different architecture]({% link cockroachcloud/architecture.md %}#cockroachdb-serverless) compared to CockroachDB {{ site.data.products.core }} and CockroachDB {{ site.data.products.dedicated }} clusters. These architectural differences have implications for how locality-aware backups can run. Serverless clusters will scale resources depending on whether they are actively in use, which means that it is less likely to have a SQL pod available in every locality. As a result, your Serverless cluster may not have a SQL pod in the locality where the data resides, resulting in that data being uploaded to a storage bucket in a locality where you do have active SQL pods. You should consider this as you plan a backup strategy that must comply with [data domiciling]({% link v23.2/data-domiciling.md %}) requirements.