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website/docs/docs/build/metricflow-time-spine.md

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ MetricFlow requires you to define a time spine table as a project level configur
 If you already have a date dimension or time spine table in your dbt project you can simply point MetricFlow at this table. To do this, update the `model` configuration to use this table in the semantic layer. For example, given the following directory structure, you can create two time spine configurations, `time_spine_hourly` and `time_spine_daily`. 
 
 ::tip 
-Previously, we required you to create a model called `metricflow_time_spine` in your dbt project. This is no longer required, however you can build your time spine model from this table if you don't have another date dimension table you want to use in your project.
+Previously, you were required to create a model called `metricflow_time_spine` in your dbt project. This is no longer required. However, you can build your time spine model from this table if you don't have another date dimension table you want to use in your project.
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 ![Time spine directory structure](/img/docs/building-metrics/time_spines.png)

website/docs/docs/dbt-versions/release-notes.md

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ Release notes are grouped by month for both multi-tenant and virtual private clo
 \* The official release date for this new format of release notes is May 15th, 2024. Historical release notes for prior dates may not reflect all available features released earlier this year or their tenancy availability.
 
 ## August 2024
-- **New**: You can now configure metrics at granularities at finer time grains, such as hour, minute, or even by the second. This is particularly useful for more detailed analysis and for datasets where high-resolution time data is required, such as minute-by-minute event tracking. Refer to [sub-daily granularity](/docs/build/granularity) for more info.
+- **New**: You can now configure metrics at granularities at finer time grains, such as hour, minute, or even by the second. This is particularly useful for more detailed analysis and for datasets where high-resolution time data is required, such as minute-by-minute event tracking. Refer to [dimensions](/docs/build/dimensions) for more information about time granularity.
 
 ## July 2024
 - **New:** [Connections](/docs/cloud/connect-data-platform/about-connections#connection-management) are now available under **Account settings** as a global setting. Previously, they were found under **Project settings**.  This is being rolled out in phases over the coming weeks.

website/sidebars.js

@@ -381,7 +381,6 @@ const sidebarSettings = {
               link: { type: "doc", id: "docs/build/metrics-overview" },
               items: [
                 "docs/build/metrics-overview",
-                "docs/build/granularity",
                 "docs/build/conversion",
                 "docs/build/cumulative",
                 "docs/build/derived",