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@@ -57,8 +57,8 @@ Claude 2 AI: Here are the key bullet points summarizing the article:
 - A [Cochrane study][cochrane] analyzed data from 148 neonatal ICU patients across 4 randomized trials to see if facilitated tucking (gently bending a baby’s arms and legs) reduces pain in neonates on mechanical ventilation undergoing endotracheal suctioning.
 - The scientists [found][pirlotte_non-pharmacological_2024] moderate-certainty evidence that facilitated tucking reduces pain by 2.0 to 3.6 points on the [Premature Infant Pain Profile][witt_guide_2016] scale used. Based on [previous studies][shah_eliciting_2004], a drop of about 1.5 points is likely to be noticeable to some parents, and of 2.3 points to clinicians.
 - The researchers wanted to assess other non-pharmaceutical treatments like rocking, skin-to-skin contact, or breastfeeding, but only gentle touch techniques were well-studied for this procedure.
-- They also wanted to look at outcomes like mortality, nausea/vomiting, and hemorrhage, but data unavailability forced to to limit analyses to just pain scores.
-- This new evidence comes as hopeful against the uncomfortable truth that medical procedures [cause pain for newborns][simons_we_2003], with early-life pain [theorized][mcpherson_influence_2020] to impact brain development.
+- They also wanted to look at outcomes like mortality, nausea/vomiting, and hemorrhage, but data unavailability forced the researchers to limit analyses to just pain scores.
+- This new evidence comes as hopeful news against the uncomfortable truth that medical procedures [cause newborns pain][simons_we_2003], with early-life pain [theorized][mcpherson_influence_2020] to impact brain development.
 
 #### The Research: