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@@ -5439,8 +5439,8 @@ to be delivered go by the Path of the Gods.</p>
 <p>A woman is like burning charcoals. A man is like a pot of ghee. When the man comes near, he melts. If he stays away, he remains solid and firm.</p>
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-				<l n="a">strī nāma māyā nikr̥tiḥ krodhamātsaryavigrahā |</l>
-				<l n="b">dūrāt tyajed anāryāṁ tāṁ jvalitāmedhyavad budhaḥ ||</l>
+				<l n="a">strī nāma māyā nikr̥tiḥ</l> <l n="b">krodhamātsaryavigrahā |</l>
+				<l n="c">dūrāt tyajed anāryāṁ tāṁ</l> <l n="d">jvalitāmedhyavad budhaḥ ||</l>
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         	<note corresp="txt:Krtyakalpataru-Moskadharma-Laksmidhara-221130_78">Stanza 78 of Kr̥tyakalpataru's Mokṣakāṇḍa by Lakṣmīdhara: <foreign>strī nāma māyāvikr̥tiḥ krodhamātsaryavigraham | dūrāt tyajed anāryāṁ tāṁ jvalanāmedhyavad budhaḥ ||</foreign></note>
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@@ -5450,19 +5450,19 @@ to be delivered go by the Path of the Gods.</p>
 <p>A woman is magic and illusion, made up of wrath and envy.</p>
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-				<l n="a">svabhāvaścaiva nārīṇāṁ narāṇāmiha dūṣaṇam |</l>
-				<l n="b">itthaṁ vai na pramādyanti pramadāsu vipaścitaḥ ||</l>
+				<l n="a">svabhāvaś caiva nārīṇāṁ</l> <l n="b">narāṇām iha dūṣaṇam |</l>
+				<l n="c">itthaṁ vai na pramādyanti</l> <l n="d">pramadāsu vipaścitaḥ ||</l>
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-        	<note sameAs="txt:MBh_13.048.037"/>
+        	<note corresp="txt:MBh_13.048.037">MBh 13.48.37: <foreign>svabhāvaś caiva nārīṇāṁ narāṇām iha dūṣaṇam | ity arthaṁ na prasajjante pramadāsu vipaścitaḥ ||</foreign></note>
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- <p xml:id="sarasamuccaya_02.441.02">svabhāvaniṅ strī ta ikaṅ magave hala riṅ vvaṅ, lara vrihati pinuharanya, muruṅakən sarvvakārya, eṅət pva saṅ paṇḍita, mataṅnyar yatna juga sira dumohiṅ strī.</p></div>
+ <p xml:id="sarasamuccaya_02.441.02">svabhāvaniṅ strī ta ikaṅ magave hala riṅ vvaṅ, lara prihati pinuharanya, muruṅakən sarvakārya, eṅət pva saṅ paṇḍita, mataṅnyar yatna juga sira dumohiṅ strī.</p></div>
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 <p>It is in the nature of women to attract men. The wise have to he careful.</p>
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 			<div type="dyad" n="442" xml:id="sarasamuccaya_02.442"><quote xml:id="sarasamuccaya_02.442.01" type="base-text" xml:lang="san-Latn"> <lg xml:id="sarasamuccaya_02.442.01.01" n="442" met="anuṣṭubh">
-				<l n="a">yeṣu yeṣu pradeśeṣu kāyo’tyantajugupsitaḥ |</l>
-				<l n="b">teṣu teṣu janaḥ sakto vairāgyaṁ kena yāsyati ||</l>
+				<l n="a">yeṣu yeṣu pradeśeṣu</l> <l n="b">kāyo ’tyantajugupsitaḥ |</l>
+				<l n="c">teṣu teṣu janaḥ sakto</l> <l n="d">vairāgyaṁ kena yāsyati ||</l>
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 			<note sameAs="txt:ma.su.513"/>
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