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<app><lem wit="#K #M">salviraniṅ</lem><rdg wit="#L">salvirriṁ</rdg></app> saṇḍanya, <app><lem wit="#K #M">salviraniṅ</lem><rdg wit="#L">salviriṁ</rdg></app> patuvavanya,
bhinukti ta ya deniṅ len<!-- #L #M insert , --> <app><lem wit="#L #M">ri</lem><rdg wit="#K">riṁ</rdg></app> samīpanya, sapuluh tahun <app><lem wit="#L">lavasanya</lem><rdg wit="#K #M">lavasnya</rdg></app>,
<app><lem type="norm">mulat ta</lem><rdg wit="#L">mula:ta</rdg><rdg wit="#K #M">mulata</rdg></app> <app><lem wit="#L">ya humənəṅ</lem><rdg wit="#K #M">ya:, Umnəṁ ta ya:</rdg></app>,
<app><lem wit="#M">ikaṅ</lem><rdg wit="#L">Ika</rdg><rdg wit="#K">hika:</rdg></app> vvaṅ maṅkana<!-- #L inserts , --> yogya <app><lem wit="#L">makadravyahanya</lem><rdg wit="#K">hika:dravyahanya</rdg><rdg wit="#M">ika makadrəvyahanya</rdg></app>.
<app><lem wit="#M">ikaṅ</lem><rdg wit="#L">Ika</rdg><rdg wit="#K">hika:</rdg></app> vvaṅ maṅkana<!-- #L inserts , --> yogya <app><lem wit="#L">makadravyaanya</lem><rdg wit="#K">hika:dravyahanya</rdg><rdg wit="#M">ika makadrəvyahanya</rdg></app>.
ikaṅ vvaṅ masaṇḍā,<!-- #L omits , --> <app><lem wit="#L">matuvava kunaṅ</lem><rdg wit="#K">Ikaṁ vvaṁ matuvava</rdg><rdg wit="#M">ikaṁ vaṁ matuvava</rdg></app>,
<app><lem type="norm">mulat ta yan</lem><rdg wit="#L">mulata: yan</rdg><rdg wit="#K">mula ya</rdg><rdg wit="#M">mulat yan</rdg></app> bhinukti dravyanya, <app><lem wit="#L">humənəṅ</lem><rdg wit="#K #M">Umnəṁ ta ya, hana</rdg></app> sapuluh tahun lavasanya,
hayva <app><lem type="conj">ya iṅucap-ucap</lem><rdg wit="#L #K #M">ṅucap-ucap</rdg><note>We consider that two syllables have been lost in the manuscript transmission and restore them based on the partial parallel <foreign>hayva ya hiṅucap-ucap de saṅ prabhu</foreign> in div ???.</note></app> <app><lem wit="#L #K">ikaṅ</lem><rdg wit="#M">ika</rdg></app> saṅ madravya,
apan alah <app><lem wit="#L">iṅucap</lem><rdg wit="#K">hinucap</rdg><rdg wit="#M">iṅucapan</rdg></app> gatinika.
<app><lem wit="#K #M">ikaṅ</lem><rdg wit="#L">riṁ</rdg></app> <app><lem wit="#L #K">vvaṅ vavaṅ</lem><rdg wit="#M">vaṁ vvaṅ</rdg></app> agələṅ,
tan hnəṅakən dravyanya <app><lem type="norm">bhinuktiniṅ</lem><rdg wit="#L">binukti, riṁṅ</rdg><rdg wit="#K">bhinuktini len·</rdg><rdg wit="#M">binukti iṁ</rdg></app> len <app><lem wit="#L #M">ri</lem><rdg wit="#K">riṁ</rdg></app> samīpanya,
tan hənəṅakən dravyanya <app><lem type="norm">bhinuktiniṅ</lem><rdg wit="#L">binukti, riṁṅ</rdg><rdg wit="#K">bhinuktini len·</rdg><rdg wit="#M">binukti iṁ</rdg></app> len <app><lem wit="#L #M">ri</lem><rdg wit="#K">riṁ</rdg></app> samīpanya,
ika ta pamuktinikaṅ vvaṅ manaṇḍa,<!-- #M omits , --> mvaṅ <app><lem wit="#L #K">saṅ</lem><rdg wit="#M"><gap reason="omitted"/></rdg></app> <app><lem wit="#M">patuvavan</lem><rdg wit="#L">matuvava</rdg><rdg wit="#K">patuvava</rdg></app> maṅkana,
maṅəlyanana <app><lem wit="#K #M">ta ya irikaṅ</lem><rdg wit="#L"><gap reason="omitted"/></rdg></app> <app><lem wit="#L #M">sabhinuktinya</lem><rdg wit="#K">saṁ binuktinya</rdg></app>,<!-- #M omits , -->
i saṅ <app><lem wit="#M">masaṇḍa</lem><rdg wit="#L">manaṇḍa</rdg><rdg wit="#K">manaṇḍa:</rdg></app>,<!-- #L #M omit , --> <app><lem wit="#K #M">mvaṅ saṅ</lem><rdg wit="#L"><gap reason="omitted"/></rdg></app>
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<p xml:id="svayambhu_07.23.02">ikaṅ vvaṅ tan lilu, tan lumpuh, tan <app><lem wit="#L #K">abəh</lem><rdg wit="#M">əbaḥ</rdg></app>, bhinuktiniṅ len dravyanya ri samīpanya,
humənəṅ ta ya,
ikaṅ <app><lem wit="#L #K">amukti</lem><rdg wit="#M">mamukti</rdg></app> dravya maṅkana<!-- #L inserts , --> yogya makadravya ya,
apan amnaṅ <app><lem type="norm">ucapən</lem><rdg wit="#L">hucapan</rdg><rdg wit="#K">hiṅucapan</rdg><rdg wit="#M">iṅucapan</rdg></app> gatinya.
kunaṅ yan <app><lem type="norm">vehən</lem><rdg wit="#L">vehin</rdg><rdg wit="#K #M">vehan</rdg></app> asatyaha, <app><lem wit="#K #M">alah ika</lem><rdg wit="#L">hala<del>hi</del> Ika</rdg></app>,
<app><lem wit="#M">amnaṅ iṅ</lem><rdg wit="#L">hamna Ikaṁṅ</rdg><rdg wit="#K">Amnaṁ hikaṁ</rdg></app> āgama, alah riṅ satya ṅaranya.</p>
apan amənaṅ <app><lem type="norm">ucapən</lem><rdg wit="#L">hucapan</rdg><rdg wit="#K">hiṅucapan</rdg><rdg wit="#M">iṅucapan</rdg></app> gatinya.
kunaṅ yan <app><lem type="norm">vehən</lem><rdg wit="#L">vehin</rdg><rdg wit="#K #M">vehan</rdg></app> asatyaa, <app><lem wit="#K #M">alah ika</lem><rdg wit="#L">hala<del>hi</del> Ika</rdg></app>,
<app><lem wit="#M">amənaṅ iṅ</lem><rdg wit="#L">hamna Ikaṁṅ</rdg><rdg wit="#K">Amnaṁ hikaṁ</rdg></app> āgama, alah riṅ satya ṅaranya.</p>
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L: Adi sīma:, sima sina[14-24]ṇḍakən·, dr̥veniṁ rare huvuhuvuḥ tinuvavakən·, matuvava tan pasa[14-25]kṣi, matuva:va sinakṣyakən·, dr̥veniṁ brahma:ṇa hinuvava:kən·, dr̥ve[14-26]niṁ ratu tinuva/va\kən·, Ika: /ta\ ka{ha:}beḥ, tan ilaṅa:,
K: Adhi sima:, sima sinaṇḍakən·, drəvyaniṁ rare huvuhuvuḥ tinuvavakən·, matuva[18v1]va tan pasakṣi, matuvava sinakṣyakən·, dravya<niṁ> saṁ brahma:ṇa: <h>tin<u>vavakən·, dravya<niṁ ratu> saṁ prabhu tinu[SH]vavakən·, Ika ta kabeḥ, tan ilaṅa: ya,
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<p xml:id="svayambhu_07.24.02"><term xml:lang="san-Latn">ādhisīmā</term>, sīmā sinaṇḍakən, <app><lem wit="#L #K">dravyaniṅ</lem><rdg wit="#M">drəvya si</rdg></app> rare uvuh-uvuh tinuvavakən,
matuvava tan pasākṣī, matuvava sinākṣyakən, <app><lem wit="#L">dravyaniṅ</lem><rdg wit="#K #M">dravya saṁ</rdg></app><!-- for niṅ vs. saṅ before brāhmaṇa, see also div 97 and 109, editorial choice to be reviewed when whole text has been edited --> brāhmaṇa <app><lem wit="#M">tinuvavakən</lem><rdg wit="#L">hinuvava:kən·</rdg><rdg wit="#K">tinvavakən·</rdg></app>,
dravya<app><lem rend="hyphenleft" wit="#L">niṅ ratu</lem><rdg wit="#K #M" cause="lexical">saṁ prabu</rdg></app> tinuvavakən, ika ta kabeh,<!-- #M omits , --> tan ilaṅa <app><lem wit="#K #M">ya</lem><rdg wit="#L"><gap reason="omitted"/></rdg></app>,
<app><lem wit="#L">yadyapin</lem><rdg wit="#K #M">yadyapi</rdg></app><!-- or ought we to edit yadyapi? --> kabhuktiha tuvi,<!-- #M omits , -->
<app><lem wit="#L">katka riṁ ka:daṣavarsa</lem><rdg wit="#K">katkaha daśavarṣaha</rdg><rdg wit="#M">katəkaha dasavarsa</rdg><note>Or emend to <foreign>katka rikaṅ daśavarṣa</foreign>?</note></app>,
<app><lem wit="#L">yadyapin</lem><rdg wit="#K #M">yadyapi</rdg></app><!-- or ought we to edit yadyapi? --> kabhuktia tuvi,<!-- #M omits , -->
<app><lem wit="#L">katəka riṅ kadaśavarṣa</lem><rdg wit="#K">katkaha daśavarṣaha</rdg><rdg wit="#M">katəkaha dasavarsa</rdg><note>Or emend to <foreign>katəka rikaṅ daśavarṣa</foreign>?</note></app>,
<app><lem wit="#L">maṅəlyanana kaṅ amukti</lem><rdg wit="#K">həlyana:na de saṁṅ amuktya maṅkana:</rdg><rdg wit="#M">elyanana de saṅ amuktya maṅana</rdg></app>.</p>
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L: Ikaṁ pihutaṁṅ alavas· [14-28]ya tan kalantara:n·, halapan kalantaranya pisan ri satavun·, kamna yan ləpihakna, [15-01]kunaṁ yan utaṁ danya, ta:ya, vaya, larva, halavas taya tan katahura:n·, pa[15-02]ñcaguṇa panahuranya || pari, L̥ṅa:, hatak·, yada:nya, ṅa || kapas·, bəsar, [15-03]kasumba:, ya sinaṅguḥ smaya:, ṅa || miñak·, pəha:n·, ghaṭa, yeka lava ṅaranya || ti[15-04]lam pataraṇa, dampa, payuṁ, yeka vaya ṅaranya ||
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<p xml:id="svayambhu_07.25.02">ikaṅ pihutaṅ<!-- #M inserts , --> alavas<!-- #K inserts , --> <app><lem wit="#L #M">ya</lem><rdg wit="#K">yen</rdg></app> tan <app><lem wit="#L #K">kalāntaran</lem><rdg wit="#M">kakalantaran</rdg></app>,
<app><lem wit="#M">alapən</lem><rdg wit="#L">halapan</rdg><rdg wit="#M">Alapan</rdg></app> kalāntaranya pisan <app><lem wit="#L #M">ri</lem><rdg wit="#K">riṁ</rdg></app> satahun,
kamna <app><lem type="emn">ya</lem><rdg wit="#L #K #M">yan</rdg><note>We emend because <foreign>kaməna</foreign> is never construed with <foreign>yan</foreign>, while <foreign>kaməna</foreign> + <foreign>ya</foreign> + irrealis verb form is found, e.g., in the <ref target="DHARMA_INSIDENKPatitihan.xml">Patitihan charter</ref> (5r4–5) <foreign>tigaṁ vṅi kamnā ya L̥L̥ba</foreign>.</note></app> ləpihakəna,
kaməna <app><lem type="emn">ya</lem><rdg wit="#L #K #M">yan</rdg><note>We emend because <foreign>kaməna</foreign> is never construed with <foreign>yan</foreign>, while <foreign>kaməna</foreign> + <foreign>ya</foreign> + irrealis verb form is found, e.g., in the <ref target="DHARMA_INSIDENKPatitihan.xml">Patitihan charter</ref> (5r4–5) <foreign>tigaṁ vṅi kamnā ya L̥L̥ba</foreign>.</note></app> ləpihakəna,
kunaṅ yan hutaṅ <term xml:lang="san-Latn"><app><lem type="norm">dhānya</lem><rdg wit="#L">da:nya</rdg><rdg wit="#K #M">danya</rdg></app></term>, <term xml:lang="san-Latn"><app><lem type="emn">sada</lem><rdg wit="#L">ta:ya</rdg><rdg wit="#K #M">saya:</rdg></app></term>,
<app><lem wit="#M"><term xml:lang="san-Latn">lava</term>,
<term xml:lang="san-Latn">vāhya</term></lem><rdg wit="#L">vaya, larva</rdg><rdg wit="#K">vaya, lava:</rdg></app>,
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K: Ikaṁ dr̥vya: Uliḥniṁ haṇḍaṇḍa:, [44v4] saṁ brahma:ṇa:, paṇḍiṭa:, tan· kəkəsana: ya, vahakni riṁ brahma:ṇa:, purohitta, piliḥ bra§[SH]ma:ṇa: lyan·, saparananya, ndan paḍa lavan saṁ purohitta:, || 0 ||
M: [36r2] Ikaṁ dr̥vya: Uliḥniṁ hanḍaṇḍa: riṁ saṁ brahma:ṇa, pa:ṇḍita, tan kəkəsana ya, vehakna riṁ brahma:-pūrohita:, piliḥ bra[SH]hmaṇa lyana, saparananya ndan· paḍa la:van saṁ pūrohita: ||
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<p>ikaṅ dravya ulihniṅ andaṇḍa saṅ brāhmaṇa, paṇḍita, tan kəkəsana ya, vehakəna riṅ brāhmaṇa, purohita, pilih brāhmaṇa lena, saparananya, ndan paḍa lavan saṅ purohita.</p>
<p>ikaṅ dravya ulihniṅ <app><lem wit="#L #K">andaṇḍa<!-- #K inserts , --> saṅ</lem><rdg wit="#M">hanḍaṇḍa: riṁ saṁ</rdg></app> brāhmaṇa, paṇḍita, tan kəkəsana ya, <app><lem wit="#L #M">vehakəna</lem><rdg wit="#K">vahakni</rdg></app> riṅ <app><lem wit="#L #K">brāhmaṇa, purohita</lem><rdg wit="#M">brahma:-pūrohita:</rdg></app>, pilih brāhmaṇa <app><lem wit="#L #M">lyana</lem><rdg wit="#K">lyan·</rdg></app>, saparananya,<!-- #M omits ,--> ndan paḍa lavan saṅ purohita.</p>
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L: Ari vadvak·, kaponakan vadvan·, rabiniṁ pama:n·, pena[36-14]n sakiṁ bapa, penan sakiṁ babu, valvaniṁ bapa, valvan saṁ brahma:ṇa, na:han lvirnya [36-15]kaṁ tan yogyalapən·, manəmva mahapataka tmən ika:, kunaṁ yan a:na maṅkana:, ḍa[36-16]ṇḍa ya de saṁ prabhu, lvirniṁ ḍaṇḍanya,
K: hari vadvan·, kaponakan· [45r1] vadon·, rabiniṁ paman·, penan sakiṁ bapa:, penan sakiṁ babu, valvaniṁ bapa:, valvaniṁ saṁ § [SH] brahma:ṇa:, nahan· lvirnya kaṁ tan yogyalapən·, manəmva maha:ptaka: tmahan ika:, kunaṁ yan a:na maṅkana:, § [45r2] ḍaṇḍa: de saṁ prabhu, lvirniṁ ḍaṇḍa:nya || 0 ||
M: Ari va:dvan·, kaponakan· vadva:n·, rabiniṁ paman·, ⌈[36r3]penan sakiṁ bapa, penan sakiṁ babu, valvaniṁ bapa, valvan saṁ brahma:ṇa, nohan lvirnya kaṁ ta:n yogya:lapən·[SH], manəmva: maha:pa:taka tmə:n ika, kunaṁ yan ana maṅkana, ḍaṇḍa: ya de saṁ prabhu, lvirniṁ ḍaṇḍa:nya ||
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<p>ari vadvan, kaponakan vadvan, rabiniṅ paman, penan sakiṅ bapa, penan sakiṅ babu, valvaniṅ bapa, valvan saṅ brāhmaṇa, nahan lvirnya kaṅ tan yogyālapən, manəmva mahāpātaka təmən ika, kunaṅ yan hana maṅkana, daṇḍa ya de saṅ prabhu, lvirniṅ daṇḍanya.</p>
<p>ari <app><lem wit="#K #M">vadvan</lem><rdg wit="#L">vadvak·</rdg></app>, kaponakan vadvan, rabiniṅ paman, penan sakiṅ bapa, penan sakiṅ babu, valvaniṅ bapa, <app><lem wit="#L #M">valvan saṅ</lem><rdg wit="#K">valvaniṁ saṁ</rdg></app> brāhmaṇa, <app><lem wit="#L #K">nāhan</lem><rdg wit="#M">nohan</rdg></app> lvirnya kaṅ tan yogyālapən, manəmva mahāpātaka <app><lem wit="#L #M">təmən</lem><rdg wit="#K" cause="lexical">tmahan</rdg></app> ika, kunaṅ yan hana maṅkana, daṇḍa <app><lem wit="#L #M">ya</lem><rdg wit="#K"><gap reason="omitted"/></rdg></app> de saṅ prabhu, lvirniṅ daṇḍanya.</p>
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