Implement all map names and hints

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diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/008_big_o/000_big_o.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/008_big_o/000_big_o.egb.txt
@@ -148,12 +148,12 @@ ROOM: $big_o_observatory
 
 POS: 26, 12
 
+FIRST_MAP_NAME: The Very Top
+FIRST_HINT: The staircase is all marble and concrete, an exquisite combination of ancient minimalism and current excess. It leads up to a sun lit space.
+
 MAP_NAME: Observatory
 HINT: At the very top of the Pyramid, a room for the Lich King.
 
-FIRST_MAP_NAME: The very top
-FIRST_HINT: The staircase is all marble and concrete, an exquisite combination of ancient minimalism and current excess. It leads up to a sun lit space.
-
 DESCRIPTION: $NONE
 
 FIGHT_SITUATION:

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/012_big_o_antechamber/000_big_o_antechamber.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/012_big_o_antechamber/000_big_o_antechamber.egb.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,12 @@ APPROACH: $big_o_antechamber FROM $top_of_climb
 
 // ---
 ROOM: $big_o_antechamber
+
+FIRST_MAP_NAME: A Clean Chamber
+FIRST_HINT: Far apart from most of the commotion, this part of the Pyramid clearly sees much less regular use. The corridors are empty and clean, and they all converge on this one silent room.
+
 MAP_NAME: Antechamber
+HINT: The room with the trap door in the ceiling and the curious lock mechanism.
 
 POS: 26, 20
 

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/024_darg_tent/000_darg_tent.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/024_darg_tent/000_darg_tent.egb.txt
@@ -4,7 +4,13 @@ APPROACH: $darg_tent FROM $barracks
 ROOM: $darg_tent
 
 POS: 33, 24
-MAP_NAME: Darg's tent
+
+FIRST_MAP_NAME: On Top of the Eastern Shaft
+FIRST_HINT: There is access to the outside of the Pyramid here. The walls close to the ancient door are painted red and decorated with human teeth and other signs of orc power.
+
+MAP_NAME: Orc Leader's Tent
+HINT: A tent placed on top of the Eastern shaft, overlooking the bay.
+
 
 FIRST_DESCRIPTION:
 Tent outside, at the top of the elevator structure. Overlooking the bay. Some important orc must be stationed here.

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/024_outlook/000_outlook.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/024_outlook/000_outlook.egb.txt
@@ -4,7 +4,12 @@ APPROACH: $outlook FROM $top_of_climb
 ROOM: $outlook
 
 POS: 18, 24
+
+FIRST_MAP_NAME: On Top of the Western Shaft
+FIRST_HINT: Something is on top of the shaft. The access to outside is well used, though it's unguarded.
+
 MAP_NAME: Outlook
+HINT: A place for a sentry with excellent eyes.
 
 FIRST_DESCRIPTION:
 A hawkman is looking into the distance, looking bored. He sees me immediately, but doesn't seem to care.

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/026_top_of_climb/000_top_of_climb.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/026_top_of_climb/000_top_of_climb.egb.txt
@@ -7,7 +7,10 @@ APPROACH: $top_of_climb FROM $keep_servants
 ROOM: $top_of_climb
 
 POS: 19, 28
-MAP_NAME: Top of the climb
+
+// Using the same text even before the player has visited this place.
+MAP_NAME: Top of a Shaft
+HINT: A dark pit extends hundreds of feet toward the bottom of the Pyramid.
 
 FIRST_DESCRIPTION:
 A huge, dark pit. The bottom is unseen, in complete darkness.

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/029_crowdsource/000_crowdsource.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/029_crowdsource/000_crowdsource.egb.txt
@@ -5,7 +5,12 @@ APPROACH: $crowdsource FROM $barracks
 ROOM: $crowdsource
 
 POS: 27, 29
+
+FIRST_MAP_NAME: Religious Place
+FIRST_HINT: Orc symbols indicate a temple, a sacrificial place, or both.
+
 MAP_NAME: Crowd's Temple
+HINT: A temple with no windows, lit by torches. The darkness and the rows of columns provide good opportunities to hide.
 
 FIRST_DESCRIPTION:
 This room serves as a temple for the orcs. It has no windows and is lit by torches. The darkness and the rows of columns provide good opportunities to hide.

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/031_barracks/000_barracks.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/031_barracks/000_barracks.egb.txt
@@ -7,7 +7,12 @@ APPROACH: $barracks FROM $darg_tent
 ROOM: $barracks
 
 POS: 34, 31
+
+FIRST_MAP_NAME: Large Quiet Area
+FIRST_HINT: Sounds of orcs snoring.
+
 MAP_NAME: Barracks
+HINT: A large room taking up two floors with bunk beds and a dining area.
 
 FIRST_DESCRIPTION:
 A large room taking up two floors. Bunk beds, and a dining area. [We] stay hidden.

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/034_conet/000_conet.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/034_conet/000_conet.egb.txt
@@ -9,9 +9,12 @@ c.hasHappened(evTookSarnToBleeds)
 ROOM: $conet
 
 POS: 17, 34
-MAP_NAME: Conet
 
-// TODO: First map name should say "quiter area"
+FIRST_MAP_NAME: Some Mechanism
+FIRST_HINT: Somethings is making a quiet chafing sounds similar. Reminds me of millstones.
+
+MAP_NAME: Conet
+HINT: A room filled with a large device.
 
 FIRST_DESCRIPTION:
 A kobold is operating a large device. He is turning a huge wheel, drawing some kind of a spring.

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/040_maintenance_shaft/000_maintenance_shaft.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/040_maintenance_shaft/000_maintenance_shaft.egb.txt
@@ -4,7 +4,8 @@ APPROACH: $maintenance_shaft FROM $elevator_28
 ROOM: $maintenance_shaft
 
 POS: 34, 40
-MAP_NAME: Maintenance Shaft above 28th Floor
+MAP_NAME: Maintenance Shaft
+HINT: A narrow crawlspace above the 28th floor.
 
 FIRST_DESCRIPTION:
 Musty, dark place. Through cracks, I can see rooms under me.

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/040_smithy/000_smithy.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/040_smithy/000_smithy.egb.txt
@@ -5,9 +5,15 @@ APPROACH: $smithy FROM $conet
 ROOM: $smithy
 
 POS: 24, 40
+
+FIRST_MAP_NAME: Sounds of an Anvil
+FIRST_HINT: A regular metallic beat and a smell of coal dust and hot steel.
+
 MAP_NAME: Smithy
+HINT: The involuntary workplace of my brother Sarn under the orc rule.
 
 FIRST_DESCRIPTION:
+// TODO: describe crawling through a high ventilation shaft
 My brother, Sarn, working for the orcs, forging weapons. He seems not fully aware of his surroundings.
 
 [[CODE]]

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/042_elevator_28/000_elevator_28.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/042_elevator_28/000_elevator_28.egb.txt
@@ -9,7 +9,9 @@ APPROACH: $elevator_28 FROM $junction
 ROOM: $elevator_28
 
 POS: 32, 42
+
 MAP_NAME: Elevator Shaft Entrance on 28th Floor
+HINT: The metal doors on the side of the dark vertical shaft are half-open here, letting some light in.
 
 FIRST_DESCRIPTION: 
 Orc noises from all around, but thankfully no orc in sight. [[IF !c.hasHappened(evKarlGuardsKilled)]]Brutal laughter from the east.[[ENDIF]]

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/042_gods_lair/000_gods_lair.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/042_gods_lair/000_gods_lair.egb.txt
@@ -7,12 +7,12 @@ FLAGS: $IDLE
 
 POS: 35, 42
 
+FIRST_MAP_NAME: Guard Room
+FIRST_HINT: An antechamber to a much bigger room, with a guard post and a huge, reinforced gate.
+
 MAP_NAME: God's Lair
 HINT: A temple to the ancients, overtaken by the orcs some time ago. For them, it serves as a pen for a huge creature, Karl.
 
-FIRST_MAP_NAME: A guard room
-FIRST_HINT: An antechamber to a much bigger room, with a guard post and a huge, reinforced gate.
-
 
 FIRST_DESCRIPTION: 
 Two orcs, a berserker and a captain, watch me approach in amazement.

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/045_junction/000_junction.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/045_junction/000_junction.egb.txt
@@ -15,11 +15,13 @@ c.hasHappened(evTookSarnToBleeds)
 ROOM: $junction
 
 POS: 27, 45
-MAP_NAME: Hub on 26th floor
-HINT: An area of increased foot traffic in the heart of the orcs’ outpost.
-FIRST_MAP_NAME: Increased foot traffic
+
+FIRST_MAP_NAME: Increased Foot Traffic
 FIRST_HINT: In this direction, footsteps and orc voices are more frequent. But the area is also dark and full of debris. It won’t be hard to hide.
 
+MAP_NAME: Traffic Hub on 26th Floor
+HINT: An area of increased foot traffic in the heart of the orcs’ outpost.
+
 FIRST_DESCRIPTION:
 This place is traffic hub. Squads of orcs travel in every conceivable direction. Some are climbing rickety ladders upwards or downwards, others walk loudly across unkempt rooms. There are many paths through here, and many hiding spots. [We] have no trouble staying unseen.
 

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/048_reservoir/000_reservoir.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/048_reservoir/000_reservoir.egb.txt
@@ -5,7 +5,12 @@ APPROACH: $reservoir FROM $training_grounds
 ROOM: $reservoir
 
 POS: 25, 48
+
+FIRST_MAP_NAME: Damp Place
+FIRST_HINT: Corridors around this place smell of stale water. A faint splashing can be heard.
+
 MAP_NAME: Reservoir
+HINT: A large, filthy pool in the middle of the building.
 
 FLAGS: $IDLE
 

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/052_cockroach_farm/000_cockroach_farm.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/052_cockroach_farm/000_cockroach_farm.egb.txt
@@ -4,10 +4,13 @@ APPROACH: $cockroach_farm FROM $junction
 ROOM: $cockroach_farm
 
 POS: 29, 52
+
+FIRST_MAP_NAME: Smell of Rot
+FIRST_HINT: The closer I am to this area, the more I can smell rotten food and flesh. No voices, though, and no footsteps.
+
 MAP_NAME: Cockroach Farm
 HINT: The main source of food for the orcs.
-FIRST_MAP_NAME: Smell of rot
-FIRST_HINT: The closer I am to this area, the more I can smell rotten food and flesh. No voices, though, and no footsteps.
+
 
 FIRST_DESCRIPTION:
 I am in a maze of twisty little passages, all alike. All crawling with cockroaches.

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/054_training_grounds/000_training_grounds.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/054_training_grounds/000_training_grounds.egb.txt
@@ -5,10 +5,15 @@ APPROACH: $training_grounds FROM $battlefield
 ROOM: $training_grounds
 
 POS: 21, 54
+
+FIRST_MAP_NAME: Grunts of Strain
+FIRST_HINT: Loud grunts and clashes of steel. Orc laughter.
+
 MAP_NAME: Training Grounds
+HINT: A small army of orcs, goblins and kobolds, all training for war.
 
 FIRST_DESCRIPTION:
-An army of orcs, goblins and kobolds, all training for war.
+A small army of orcs, goblins and kobolds, all training for war.
 
 DESCRIPTION: $NONE
 

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/064_battefield/000_battlefield.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/064_battefield/000_battlefield.egb.txt
@@ -7,7 +7,12 @@ APPROACH: $battlefield FROM $training_grounds
 ROOM: $battlefield
 
 POS: 28, 64
+
+FIRST_MAP_NAME: Battlefield Floor
+FIRST_HINT: The frontier between the humans at the bottom and the orcs at the top. Currently held and guarded by the orcs.
+
 MAP_NAME: Battlefield Floor
+HINT: A floor devoid of walls.
 
 WHERE: among the columns
 

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/065_oracle/000_oracle_main.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/065_oracle/000_oracle_main.egb.txt
@@ -6,7 +6,12 @@ ROOM: $oracle_main
 FLAGS: $IDLE
 
 POS: 39, 65
-MAP_NAME: Oracle's
+
+FIRST_MAP_NAME: Someone's Study
+FIRST_HINT: A room with a good view of the forest of San Francisco and the Bay.
+
+MAP_NAME: Oracle's Study
+HINT: A place full of books and the smell of coffee.
 
 FIRST_DESCRIPTION:
 A woman is here. She seems deep in though, walking up and down the room, over debris.

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/067_jungle/000_jungle_entrance.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/067_jungle/000_jungle_entrance.egb.txt
@@ -6,7 +6,9 @@ APPROACH: $jungle_entrance FROM $pond
 ROOM: $jungle_entrance
 
 POS: 21, 72
+
 MAP_NAME: Jungle
+HINT: This is where the interior of the Pyramid opens into a large crater, covered in vegetation.
 
 FIRST_DESCRIPTION:
 Corridors full of vegetation. Path through that, like a path in a forest, but indoors.

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/067_jungle/010_deathless_village.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/067_jungle/010_deathless_village.egb.txt
@@ -5,7 +5,12 @@ APPROACH: $deathless_village FROM $dragon_egg_room
 ROOM: $deathless_village
 
 POS: 18, 68
+
+FIRST_MAP_NAME: Village in the Jungle
+FIRST_HINT: I can see some buildings through the canopy of leaves. The buildings are placed on a ledge overlooking the crater.
+
 MAP_NAME: Village of the Deathless
+HINT: A village of cultists positioned on a ledge overlooking the jungle.
 
 FIRST_DESCRIPTION:
 On a ledge overlooking the jungle, a village of cultists. They call themselves the Deathless, and they worship the ancients. Their leader is a child.

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/067_jungle/010_dragon_egg.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/067_jungle/010_dragon_egg.egb.txt
@@ -6,11 +6,18 @@ c.hasHappened(evDeathlessRespectGained)
 ROOM: $dragon_egg_room
 
 POS: 15, 67
+
+FIRST_MAP_NAME: Sacred Place
+FIRST_HINT: A well-hidden place of worship near the village of the Deathless.
+
 MAP_NAME: Sacred Place
+HINT: The place with the Dragon Egg.
 
 FIRST_DESCRIPTION:
 The sacred shrine of the Deathless.
 
+There's a pedestal here, and on it, the legendary Dragon Egg.
+
 ![Illustration of a pedestal with "Ovum Draconis" written on it. On the pedestal, there is a frag grenade.](dragonegg.png)
 
 TODO: The Deathless decide they will give me the Dragon Egg, to aid in my quest. It's a big deal. I receive the dragon egg. The Deathless explain to me its operation. (It's a frag grenade.)

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/067_jungle/050_pond.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/067_jungle/050_pond.egb.txt
@@ -5,7 +5,9 @@ APPROACH: $pond FROM $pond_lizard_rock
 ROOM: $pond
 
 POS: 14, 74
+
 MAP_NAME: Pond
+HINT: A small body of water at the bottom of the crater.
 
 FIRST_DESCRIPTION:
 [We] follow a narrow path through the foliage, smelling the crispness of pine needles and the smell of fresh, cold air. The path leads towards a clearing with a pond. A strange, big, ancient object is suspended above the pond, held above the ground by damaged pillars.

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/067_jungle/060_pond_lizard_rock.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/067_jungle/060_pond_lizard_rock.egb.txt
@@ -6,7 +6,9 @@ c.playerHasVisited("pond_lizard_rock")
 ROOM: $pond_lizard_rock
 
 POS: 13, 72
-MAP_NAME: The Lizardman's Rock
+
+MAP_NAME: Lizardman's Rock
+HINT: A concrete platform near the pond that serves as the lizardman's new base.
 
 FIRST_DESCRIPTION:
 [We] circle the pond and climb on a concrete platform that serves as the lizardman's new base. I notice a half-eaten human leg lying on the ground here.

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/070_knights_hq/000_knights_hq_main.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/070_knights_hq/000_knights_hq_main.egb.txt
@@ -10,7 +10,8 @@ FLAGS: $IDLE
 
 POS: 37, 70
 
-MAP_NAME: Knights Headquarters
+MAP_NAME: Command Post
+HINT: This is the original center of operations of the Knights of San Francisco. 
 
 FIRST_DESCRIPTION:
 I come to the headquarters. A large room overlooking the bay. Latrines on the right, hanging out of the window frames, providing fertilizer to the farmer slope below. To the left, as far from the latrines as possible, the bunks where a few of the knights sleep.

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/072_elevator_12/000_elevator_12.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/072_elevator_12/000_elevator_12.egb.txt
@@ -10,10 +10,14 @@ ROOM: $elevator_12
 FLAGS: $IDLE
 
 POS: 32, 72
-MAP_NAME: Elevator Shaft Entrance on 12th Floor
 
-DESCRIPTION: 
-A rare access to the ancient elevator shaft.
+MAP_NAME: Elevator Shaft Entrance on the 12th Floor
+HINT: A rare access to the ancient elevator shaft.
+
+FIRST_DESCRIPTION: 
+Darkness shrouds most of the vertical shaft above, except for a single bright slit many floors above. Down here, only a narrow passage connects the elevator shaft with the corridors surrounding it.
+
+DESCRIPTION: $NONE
 
 
 NOTES:

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/078_slopes/000_slopes.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/078_slopes/000_slopes.egb.txt
@@ -6,7 +6,9 @@ ROOM: $slopes
 FLAGS: $IDLE
 
 POS: 42, 78
+
 MAP_NAME: Slopes
+HINT: The farmland on the outer wall of the Pyramid.
 
 FIRST_DESCRIPTION:
 The steep slope of the Pyramid is covered in vines from this point down. Young men and women are picking Fruit.

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/083_farmers_village/000_farmers_village.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/083_farmers_village/000_farmers_village.egb.txt
@@ -8,12 +8,13 @@ ROOM: $farmers_village
 FLAGS: $IDLE
 
 POS: 35, 83
-MAP_NAME: Farmers' village
-HINT: A settlement of people who farm the vines that grow on the outside of the Pyramid.
 
-FIRST_MAP_NAME: A settled area
+FIRST_MAP_NAME: Settled Area
 FIRST_HINT: From the outside, this part of the Pyramid is covered with vines, and there are clear signs of settlement in the windows.
 
+MAP_NAME: Farmers' Village
+HINT: A settlement of people who farm the vines that grow on the outside of the Pyramid.
+
 FIRST_DESCRIPTION:
 The corridors here look more like streets. Painted walls on either side, with wooden windows in them, and doors. Well dressed people go about their business. Polite nods in my direction.
 

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/086_keep/010_keep_bedroom.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/086_keep/010_keep_bedroom.egb.txt
@@ -13,7 +13,9 @@ ROOM: $keep_bedroom
 FLAGS: $IDLE
 
 POS: 15, 86
-MAP_NAME: Lord's quarters
+
+MAP_NAME: Lord's Quarters
+HINT: Though derelict, these are still the nicest parts of the Keep.
 
 FIRST_DESCRIPTION:
 Redwood parquetry, the wooden flooring of the rich, creaks underfoot.

diff --git a/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/086_keep/010_keep_dining.egb.txt b/edgehead/assets/text/Knights/locations/086_keep/010_keep_dining.egb.txt
@@ -6,8 +6,9 @@ ROOM: $keep_dining
 FLAGS: $IDLE
 
 POS: 9, 86
+
 MAP_NAME: Dining Room
-HINT: The place where the Lord of the Keep dined with his family. A place with a good overview of the Pyramid's surroundings.
+HINT: The place where the Lord of the Keep dined with his family. A place with a good view of the redwoods outside.
 
 FIRST_MAP_NAME: Dining Room
 FIRST_HINT: I can see a female figure silhouetted against a tall window. She is not moving but I can feel she's alive, or at the very least undead. She waits.