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📝 WalkthroughWalkthroughThe pull request updates the documentation for the LG webOS TV integration in Home Assistant. The changes focus on refining terminology, replacing "Smart TV" with "TV" throughout the document. The update introduces new configuration options, clarifies device compatibility, and reorganizes sections on actions, notifications, and troubleshooting. The documentation now provides more detailed guidance on using the integration, including specific examples for actions like turning on the TV, selecting sound output, and sending commands. Changes
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User->>HomeAssistant: Configure TV integration
HomeAssistant->>LG_WebOS_TV: Establish connection
LG_WebOS_TV-->>HomeAssistant: Connection confirmed
User->>HomeAssistant: Send TV commands
HomeAssistant->>LG_WebOS_TV: Execute actions
LG_WebOS_TV-->>HomeAssistant: Action response
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32-44: Minor grammar improvements neededThe configuration documentation is clear, but there are a few grammar improvements to consider:
- Line 43: Consider removing "of" to be more concise: "...will offer all the sources of the TV"
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Context: ... any source the media player will offer all of the sources of the TV. {% endconfiguration_...(ALL_OF_THE)
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50-138: Well-structured actions documentation with minor grammar improvements neededThe actions section provides comprehensive documentation, but consider these improvements:
- Line 60: Add a comma after "for example"
- Line 64: Add a comma after "To use this feature"
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[misspelling] ~142-~142: Use “an” instead of ‘a’ if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘an article’, ‘an hour’.
Context: ...orm allows you to send notifications to a LG webOS TV. The icon can be overridden...(EN_A_VS_AN)
140-164: Grammar improvement needed in notifications sectionChange "a LG webOS TV" to "an LG webOS TV" as "LG" starts with a vowel sound.
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[misspelling] ~142-~142: Use “an” instead of ‘a’ if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘an article’, ‘an hour’.
Context: ...orm allows you to send notifications to a LG webOS TV. The icon can be overridden...(EN_A_VS_AN)
254-257: Grammar improvement needed in limitations sectionConsider revising "Most newer TV firmware" to "Newer TV firmware" for better grammar.
The limitations are clearly documented and provide important information about network configuration and notification constraints.
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[grammar] ~257-~257: Only “newer” (without ‘Most’) is used to write the comparative.
Context: ...tocol from Home Assistant to your TV. - Most newer TV firmware does not allow passing the ...(MOST_COMPARATIVE)
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[style] ~43-~43: Consider removing “of” to be more concise
Context: ... any source the media player will offer all of the sources of the TV. {% endconfiguration_...
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[typographical] ~60-~60: After the expression ‘for example’ a comma is usually used.
Context: ... no | Entity requested to turn on. For example media_player.lg_webos_tv| If you wan...
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[typographical] ~64-~64: It seems that a comma is missing.
Context: ...e to use WakeOnLan feature. To use this feature your TV should be connected to your net...
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[misspelling] ~142-~142: Use “an” instead of ‘a’ if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘an article’, ‘an hour’.
Context: ...orm allows you to send notifications to a LG webOS TV. The icon can be overridden...
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[grammar] ~257-~257: Only “newer” (without ‘Most’) is used to write the comparative.
Context: ...tocol from Home Assistant to your TV. - Most newer TV firmware does not allow passing the ...
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2-3: LGTM! Terminology improvementsThe title and description changes improve consistency by using the simpler "TV" term instead of "Smart TV".
46-48: LGTM! Clear device compatibility statementThe supported devices section clearly specifies the compatibility requirements.
166-169: LGTM! Clear data update mechanism documentationThe data updates section clearly explains how the TV pushes data to Home Assistant.
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170-183: LGTM! Comprehensive source switching documentationThe section provides clear instructions for finding and switching sources, with helpful UI navigation steps and examples.
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[uncategorized] ~179-~179: Possible missing comma found.
Context: ...r entity. 3. Look for thesource_listattribute which contains all available sources. ...(AI_HYDRA_LEO_MISSING_COMMA)
219-229: LGTM! Clear channel changing examplesThe examples correctly use the updated entity ID format and provide clear instructions for channel changing.
240-252: LGTM! Comprehensive troubleshooting guidanceThe troubleshooting section effectively addresses common issues with clear solutions.
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