Docs updates based on peer review feedback, #1520

documentation/asciidoc/topics/proc_adding_labels_annotations_env.adoc

@@ -17,8 +17,8 @@ Add labels and annotations to your {ispn_operator} subscription with the `spec.c
 
 * Use the {openshift} Console.
 +
-. Navigate to **Operators** > **Installed Operators** > click the *{ispn_operator}*.
-. Select **Edit Subscription** from the **Actions** menu.
+. Navigate to **Operators** > **Installed Operators** >  *{ispn_operator}*.
+. From the *Actions* menu, select *Edit Subscription*.
 
 .Labels and annotations with environment variables
 [source,yaml,options="nowrap",subs=attributes+]

documentation/asciidoc/topics/proc_defining_environment_var.adoc

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 = Defining environment variables in the {ispn_operator} subscription
 
 [role="_abstract"]
-You can define environment variables in your {ispn_operator} subscription either when you create the subscription or by editing it later on.
+You can define environment variables in your {ispn_operator} subscription either when you create or edit the subscription.
 
 //Downstream content
 ifdef::downstream[]
@@ -35,15 +35,15 @@ endif::downstream[]
 include::yaml/env_var_subscription.yaml[]
 ----
 +
-For example, use `spec.config.env` field to set the local timezone:
+For example, use the `spec.config.env` field to set the local time zone:
 +
 .subscription-{subscription_name}.yaml
 [source,options="nowrap",subs=attributes+]
 ----
 include::yaml/env_var_timezone.yaml[]
 ----
 
-. Create a subscription for {ispn_operator}.
+. Create a subscription for {ispn_operator}:
 +
 [source,options="nowrap",subs=attributes+]
 ----
@@ -69,6 +69,6 @@ include::yaml/env_var_timezone.yaml[]
 
 //Downstream content
 ifdef::downstream[]
-* In the {openshift} Console, navigate to *Operators* > *Installed Operators* > click the *{ispn_operator}*.
-Then select *Edit Subscription* from the *Actions* menu.
+* In the {openshift} Console, navigate to *Operators* > *Installed Operators* > *{ispn_operator}*.
+From the *Actions* menu, select *Edit Subscription*.
 endif::downstream[]