Update privacy.mdx

better phrasing

src/pages/privacy.mdx

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ Jan, Cortex, and all Homebrew Computer Company products do not collect personall
 
 ### When you voluntarily provide data
 
-We -do- collect personal information you voluntarily provide us, e.g., when you sign up for our newsletter, join our Discord, or contact us via email. 
+We -do- collect personal information you voluntarily provide us, e.g., your email, when you sign up for our newsletter or contact us via email. 
 
 ### Jan 
 
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ Jan uses [Umami](https://umami.is/) for analytics, which is a privacy-focused, G
 - OS and device characteristics
 - IP address
 
-Jan does not get any of this data, and we do not track IP addresses or other identifying information. We are actively looking into more privacy-respecting ways to handle analytics, crash reports, and telemetry and would love to work with the community on this. 
+Jan, however, does not retain this data. We do not track IP addresses or other identifying information. We are actively looking into more privacy-respecting ways to handle analytics, crash reports, and telemetry and would love to work with the community on this. 
 
 ### Cortex