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February 16, 2023 21:46
krepysh
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2_if2.py
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| return 3 | ||
| elif len(str_1) > len(str_2): | ||
| return 2 | ||
| else: |
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Если убрать блок else и делать после if return, у нас порядок исполнения кода не поменяется, а код станет чуть проще (менее вложенный, меньше блоков)
3_for.py
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| a_sale += 1 | ||
| total_sales += sale | ||
| average_sales += 1 | ||
| print(f'суммарное количество продаж {phone}: {total_sales}, среднее количество продаж {phone}: {total_sales // average_sales}') |
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Как правило большого пальца, давай будем разделять "посчитать", "подготовить сообщение" и вывести.
Давай сделаем так что бы функция возвращала набор чисел
return phone, total_sales, average_sale
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| def main(sales_figures): | ||
| total_sales = average_sales = 0 | ||
| for i in sales_figures: |
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Все что в for происходит можно вынести отдельную функцию
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| def main(sales_figures): | ||
| total_sales = average_sales = 0 |
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Более привычный вариант
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| total_sales = average_sales = 0 | |
| total_sales, average_sales = 0, 0 |
7_exception2.py
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| max_discount = abs(int(max_discount)) | ||
| if max_discount >= 100: | ||
| raise ValueError('Слишком большая максимальная скидка') | ||
| if discount >= max_discount: |
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я бы ожидал тут не строгое неравенство, что бы 20 процентов можно было использовать.
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