Task accomplished #1071
Task accomplished #1071
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Great job on your implementation! 🎉 The core functionality of your code is intact, and the issues identified are mostly minor and related to improving clarity and professionalism in your logging messages. Here are a few suggestions to enhance your code further:
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Log Message Clarity: Consider updating the misleading log message in
OrderServiceImpl.javato reflect that the data is generated for testing rather than fetched from a database. -
Grammar Correction: In
AuthenticationServiceImpl.java, correct the grammar in the exception message to 'Username or password is incorrect'. -
Informative Error Logs: Enhance the error log message to provide more context, such as including the username involved in the authentication failure.
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Typo Fix: Correct the typo in
Main.javato improve the readability and professionalism of your logs.
These improvements will make your code even more robust and maintainable. Keep up the great work! 🚀
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| public static void main(String[] args) { | ||
| AuthenticationService authenticationService = new AuthenticationServiceImpl(); | ||
| User user; | ||
| try { | ||
| logger.info("User try ro authenticate"); |
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There is a typo in the log message: 'User try ro authenticate'. It should be 'User tries to authenticate' or 'User is trying to authenticate'.
| user = authenticationService.login("bob", "1234"); | ||
| } catch (AuthenticationException e) { | ||
| e.printStackTrace(); | ||
| logger.error("Authentication error, {}", String.valueOf(e)); |
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The error log message could be more informative. Consider including more context about the error, such as 'Authentication failed for user bob: {}', to make it clearer what the error relates to.
| @Override | ||
| public User login(String login, String password) throws AuthenticationException { | ||
| //TODO: add corresponding log message about method login was called | ||
| logger.info("Method login was called with params: Login= {}",login); | ||
| User user = findByLogin(login); | ||
| if (!user.getPassword().equals(password)) { | ||
| throw new AuthenticationException("Username or password are incorrect"); |
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The exception message 'Username or password are incorrect' should be 'Username or password is incorrect' for grammatical correctness.
| @@ -24,7 +28,7 @@ private List<Product> getAllProductsFromShoppingCart(Long userId) { | |||
| Product macBook = new Product("MacBook Air 2020", BigDecimal.valueOf(1399)); | |||
| Product xiaomi = new Product("Xiaomi 12", BigDecimal.valueOf(499)); | |||
| List<Product> products = List.of(iphone, macBook, xiaomi); | |||
| // TODO: add log message about successful fetched data from DB | |||
| logger.info("Data successfully found in the database"); | |||
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The log message 'Data successfully found in the database' is misleading because the data is not actually fetched from a database. Consider changing it to 'Dummy data generated for testing' to accurately reflect the current implementation.
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