[TrungBui32] iP #112

TrungBui32 · 2024-09-04T05:25:45Z

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Yisoong

Looks good overall but you might want to rename some of your variables for greater clarity. Good Job !!

Yisoong · 2024-09-04T06:30:09Z

src/main/java/Poirot.java

+    private static int last_index = 0;
+
+    public static void echo(String msg) {
+        System.out.println("____________________________________________________________\n");


I noticed that this was repeated many times. Perhaps it would be good to use a utility function to print the horizontal lines instead.

Yisoong · 2024-09-04T06:37:49Z

src/main/java/Poirot.java

+
+public class Poirot {
+    private static Task[] list_actions = new Task[100];
+    private static int last_index = 0;


Perhaps it would be better to use lastIndex instead of last_index.

Yisoong · 2024-09-04T06:40:31Z

src/main/java/Poirot.java

+        System.out.println("Hello! I'm POIROT\n");
+        System.out.println("What can I do for you?");
+        System.out.println("____________________________________________________________\n");
+        boolean working = true;


Since this is a boolean, it might be better to call it "isWorking".

Yisoong · 2024-09-04T06:43:54Z

src/main/java/Poirot.java

+        System.out.println("____________________________________________________________\n");
+    }
+
+    public static void add(Task action) {


"add" is a bit ambiguous. It might be better to use "addTask" instead.

TPH777

Coding standards and code quality is not strictly followed, improvements can be made

TPH777 · 2024-09-04T06:46:04Z

src/main/java/Poirot.java

+    private static int last_index = 0;
+
+    public static void echo(String msg) {
+        System.out.println("____________________________________________________________\n");


Abstracting the printing of divider to a function will improve readability

TPH777 · 2024-09-04T06:46:40Z

src/main/java/Poirot.java

+
+public class Poirot {
+    private static Task[] list_actions = new Task[100];
+    private static int last_index = 0;


size may be a better name than last_index

TPH777 · 2024-09-04T06:47:31Z

src/main/java/Poirot.java

+import java.util.Scanner;
+
+public class Poirot {
+    private static Task[] list_actions = new Task[100];


Use camelCase for variables, E.g. listActions, but a better name will be tasks

TPH777 · 2024-09-04T06:49:18Z

src/main/java/Poirot.java

+        } else {
+            System.out.println("____________________________________________________________\n");
+            for (int i = 0; i < last_index; i++) {
+                System.out.println((i + 1) + ".[" + list_actions[i].getStatusIcon() + "]" + list_actions[i].getDescription());


Abstract this to a function and give variable names for list_actions[i].getStatusIcon() and list_actions[i].getDescription to improve code readability

TPH777 · 2024-09-04T06:51:16Z

src/main/java/Poirot.java

+                    System.out.println("____________________________________________________________\n");
+                    break;
+                case "unmark":
+                    int y = Integer.parseInt(list_input[1]) - 1;


Set a variable for list_input[1] as it is unclear what is that

TPH777 · 2024-09-04T06:52:00Z

src/main/java/Poirot.java

+                    System.out.println("____________________________________________________________\n");
+                    break;
+                case "unmark":
+                    int y = Integer.parseInt(list_input[1]) - 1;


use a better name instead of y

Merge branch-Level-5 with master branch

Mahesh1772

Good job!

The code looks clean and solid. Try to make use of inheritance even more in your code as OOP make coding more scalable and easier to manage. Consider adding JavaDocs in the future commits

Mahesh1772 · 2024-09-20T08:00:54Z

src/main/java/Deadline.java

+    }
+    @Override
+    public String toFileString() {
+        return "D | " + (isDone ? "1" : "0") + " | " + description + " | " + by;


Consider adding the description in the parent classes toFIleString() to make full use of the inheritance principles

Mahesh1772 · 2024-09-20T08:01:09Z

src/main/java/Event.java

+
+    @Override
+    public String toString() {
+        return "[E][" + getStatusIcon() + "] " + description + " (from: " + from + " to: " + to + ")";


Consider adding the description in the parent classes toFIleString() to make full use of the inheritance principles

Mahesh1772 · 2024-09-20T08:02:00Z

src/main/java/Poirot.java

+    public static final String LINE = "____________________________________________________________\n";
+    private static Task[] tasks = new Task[100];
+    private static final String FILE_PATH = "./data/duke.txt";
+    private static int last_index = 0;


Consider naming the variables with more than one word in camelCase

Mahesh1772 · 2024-09-20T08:03:35Z

src/main/java/Poirot.java

@@ -0,0 +1,204 @@
+import java.io.*;


Try not to use the * to import everything. Instead explicitly import what is needed.

Mahesh1772 · 2024-09-20T08:06:28Z

src/main/java/Task.java

+    public abstract String toString();
+    public abstract String toFileString();


Consider making then non abstract methods, as they can be easily utilized by sub-classes. As such, Task could not be a abstract class.

Mahesh1772 · 2024-09-20T08:09:46Z

src/main/java/Poirot.java

+                        tasks[x].setDone(true);
+                        System.out.println(LINE);
+                        System.out.println("Nice! I've marked this task as done:\n");
+                        System.out.print("[" + tasks[x].getStatusIcon() + "] ");
+                        System.out.println(tasks[x].getDescription());
+                        System.out.println(LINE);
+                        saveTasksToFile(); // Save the task after marking it
+                        break;
+                    case "unmark":
+                        validateTaskNumber(list_input);
+                        int y = Integer.parseInt(list_input[1]) - 1;
+                        tasks[y].setDone(false);
+                        System.out.println(LINE);
+                        System.out.println("OK, I've marked this task as not done yet:\n");
+                        System.out.print("[" + tasks[y].getStatusIcon() + "] ");
+                        System.out.println(tasks[y].getDescription());
+                        System.out.println(LINE);
+                        saveTasksToFile();


Consider saving the string formatted with the current isDone in a separate method inside Task class to reduce duplicate lines of code

Mahesh1772 · 2024-09-20T08:10:52Z

src/main/java/Poirot.java

+
+        boolean working = true;
+        Scanner scan = new Scanner(System.in);
+        while (working) {


Consider doing a saving changes to file at the end of each iteration, as such avoiding to call it every time something is changed, reduce duplicate lines

Branch level 9

TrungBui32 added 4 commits August 29, 2024 16:54

Level 0: Rename, Greet, Exit

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Level 1: Echo

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Level 2. Add, List

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Level 3. Mark as Done

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Yisoong reviewed Sep 4, 2024

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TPH777 reviewed Sep 4, 2024

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TrungBui32 added 9 commits September 4, 2024 21:52

Level 4. ToDos, Events, Deadlines

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Try testing

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Level 5. Handle Errors

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Merge branch 'branch-Level-5'

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Merge branch-Level-5 with master branch

Level 6. Delete

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Level 7. Save

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Merge branch 'branch-Level-6'

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Merge branch 'branch-Level-7'

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Add saveTasksToFile to delete in Level 7. Save

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Mahesh1772 reviewed Sep 20, 2024

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TrungBui32 and others added 12 commits October 1, 2024 22:40

Make the program more OOP

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Compile OOP version

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Level 8. Dates and Times

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Level 9. Find

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Merge pull request #2 from TrungBui32/branch-Level-9

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Branch level 9

Fix bugs of Deadline and Event

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Add JavaDocs comments

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Update name in README.md

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Update all features in README.md

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rebuild ip.jar

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Update classes

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Fix bug in Deadline and reformat code

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		public abstract String toString();
		public abstract String toFileString();

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