For clarity in the description of usecase for ssh. #276
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Given previous use of "It's" it is unclear which noun (the datacenter or the loadbalancer) that "It's" referring to. And also for clarity moving this sentence that helps define the situation, "The loadbalancer's IP address is 10.10.10.20.", to the for front of the description helps.
| is a machine on the 10.10.10.0/24 network with ssh access--``jumphost-foo-1``, | ||
| accessible via DNS with the LAN IP 10.10.10.19. Therefore, one way to | ||
| access ``lb-foo-1`` is via bouncing through ``jumphost-foo-1``. OpenSSH | ||
| interface listening on port 9090, it's IP address is 10.10.10.20. This interface is only |
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Given previous use of "It's" it is unclear which noun, the datacenter or the loadbalancer, that "It's" referring to. And also for clarity moving this sentence, that helps define the situation, "The loadbalancer's IP address is 10.10.10.20.", to the forefront of the description.