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@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ electric bass at the age of twelve, studied music composition in college, and
 had the opportunity to perform with various groups along the way. After
 completing my studies, I recorded two albums featuring my original compositions.
 
-Currently residing in Portland, OR with my wife, two stepsons, our adorable
+Currently residing in Portland, OR with my wife, two stepsons, and our adorable
 little Chiweenie, Fernie, we take every opportunity to explore the beauty of the
 Pacific Northwest.
 

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@@ -11,16 +11,16 @@ <h1>Hi, I'm Paul.</h1>
    writing proficiency, and a robust understanding of cloud computing,
    containerization, and orchestration technologies.</p>
 <p>Over the past four years, I've been immersed in the world of technical writing,
-   honing my skills as both a full-time and freelance writer. My areas of expertise
+   honing my skills as a full-time and freelance writer. My areas of expertise
    include docs-as-code authoring, API documentation, and the management of complex
    documentation sets. I have a keen eye for building information architecture that
    ensures users can easily navigate and understand complex technical concepts.</p>
 <p>At Mirantis, I had the opportunity to make a significant impact on both the
    development and documentation fronts. As an integral part of the Mirantis Secure
    Registry development team, I successfully delivered critical bug fixes and
-   implemented two new features. Leveraging Go as my primary language, I built a
-   Prometheus exporter into MSR. This enhancement empowers users to monitor the
-   health of their MSR clusters with ease and precision.</p>
+   implemented two new features. Notably, I built a Prometheus exporter into MSR,
+   leveraging Go as my primary language. This enhancement empowers users to monitor
+   the health of their MSR clusters with ease and precision.</p>
 <p>I take great pride in my ability to deliver high-quality documentation and
    code that not only meets technical requirements but also enhances
    user experiences. Feel free to explore my portfolio to see examples of my