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 # NFT Use Cases
 
-NFTs, or non-fungible tokens, are a type of digital asset that is unique and cannot be replaced by another identical asset. This article describes the approaches and already implemented use cases of NFTs in TON Blockchain.
+NFTs, or non-fungible tokens, are a type of digital asset that is unique, and cannot be replaced by another identical asset. This article describes the approaches and already implemented use cases of NFTs in TON Blockchain.
 
-After reading this article, you will understand why NFTs are helpful and how you could even use them in one of your projects.
+After reading this article, you will understand why are NFTs helpful and how you can use them in one of your projects.
 
 ## Item ownership
 
-Non-fungible tokens are mostly known as cool pictures that you can buy and sell on the NFT marketplaces like OpenSea or [getgems.io](https://getgems.io).
+Non-fungible tokens are mostly known as cool pictures that you can buy and sell on NFT marketplaces like OpenSea or [getgems.io](https://getgems.io).
 
 NFT pictures and collections are funny and help people understand the concept of blockchain-based ownership. However, in the long-term, the NFT focus should shift beyond this to illustrate their wide variety of potential use cases.
 
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 ## Accounts as NFTs
 
-In November, the Telegram team launched [Fragment](https://fragment.com/) marketplace where anyone can buy and own short Telegram usernames backed by an NFT on TON Blockchain.
+In November, the Telegram team launched [Fragment](https://fragment.com/) marketplace, where anyone can buy and sell Telegram usernames or Anonymous Numbers backed by an NFT on the TON Blockchain.
 
-Moreover, in December the Telegram team released [No-SIM sign-up](https://telegram.org/blog/ultimate-privacy-topics-2-0#sign-up-without-a-sim-card). You can buy a **virtual phone number** as a NFT to sign up to Telegram Messenger and ensure that your privacy is secured by TON Blockchain.
+Moreover, in December the Telegram team released [No-SIM sign-up](https://telegram.org/blog/ultimate-privacy-topics-2-0#sign-up-without-a-sim-card). You can buy a **virtual phone number** as an NFT to sign up in the Telegram Messenger and ensure that your privacy is secured by the TON Blockchain.
 
 ## Domain as an NFT
 
 The TON DNS service works fully on-chain. If you want to own a domain in the decentralized web backed by TON like `mystore.ton` you need to buy the NFT domain on [DNS marketplace](https://dns.ton.org/) for your wallet and pay renting fee for storing and processing data in the blockchain.
 
+The NFT usernames bought on Fragment can also be used for TON DNS to bind them to your wallet and use your username.t.me NFT as a wallet address.
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 ### NFT as an address for your wallet
 
 Everyone in crypto understands the idea of unique address of wallet like `Egbt...Ybgx`.
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 That's why a wallet backed by the domain `billy.ton` would work better for users outside of crypto.
 
-[Tonkeeper](https://tonkeeper.com/) wallet already implemented this approach. You can check it now.
+The [Tonkeeper](https://tonkeeper.com/) wallet has already implemented this approach. You can check it out now.
 
 ## Ticket as an NFT
 
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 Using NFTs as authorization tokens introduces a revolutionary approach to granting access rights and permissions.
 
-NFT tokens ensure heightened security and cannot be easily copied or forged. This eliminates the risk of unauthorized access or fake authentication, providing reliable authentication.
+NFT tokens ensure elevated security and cannot be easily copied or forged. This eliminates the risk of unauthorized access or fake authentication, providing reliable authentication.
 
 Furthermore, thanks to their transparency and traceability, the authenticity and ownership of an NFT authorization token can be easily verified. This enables quick and efficient verification, ensuring convenient access to various platforms, services, or restricted content.
 
-It is also worth noting that NFTs provide flexibility and adaptability in managing permissions. Since NFTs can be programmatically encoded with specific access rules or attributes, they can adapt to different authorization requirements. This flexibility allows for fine-grained control over access levels, granting or revoking permissions as needed, which can be particularly valuable in scenarios that require hierarchical access or temporary authorization restrictions.
+It is also worth mentioning that NFTs provide flexibility and adaptability in managing permissions. Since NFTs can be programmatically encoded with specific access rules or attributes, they can adapt to different authorization requirements. This flexibility allows for fine-grained control over access levels, granting or revoking permissions as needed, which can be particularly valuable in scenarios that require hierarchical access or temporary authorization restrictions.
 
-One of the services currently offering NFT authentication is [Playmuse](https://playmuse.org/), a media service built on the TON blockchain. This service aims to attract web3 musicians and other creators of creative content.
+One of the services currently offering NFT authentication is [Playmuse](https://playmuse.org/), a media service built on the TON blockchain. This service aims to attract Web3 musicians as well as other creators.
 
-Owners of NFTs from Playmuse gain access to holders chat. Being a participant in this chat provides opportunity to influence the development direction of the service, vote on various initiatives, and receive early access to presales and NFT auctions featuring renowned creators.
+Owners of NFTs from Playmuse gain access to the holders chat. Being a participant in this chat provides opportunity to influence the development direction of the service, vote on various initiatives, and receive early access to presales and NFT auctions featuring renowned creators.
 
 Access to the chat is facilitated through a Telegram bot, which verifies the presence of a Playmuse NFT in the user's wallet.
 
 It is important to note that this is just one example, and as the TON ecosystem evolves, new services and technologies for authentication via NFTs may emerge. Keeping up with the latest developments in the TON space can help identify other platforms or open-source projects that provide similar authentication capabilities.
 
 ## NFT as a Virtual Asset in Games
 
-NFT integrated to game allows players to own and trade these items in a way that is verifiable and secure, which can add an extra layer of value and excitement to the game.
+NFT integrated to a game allows players to own and trade in-game items in a way that is verifiable and secure, which adds an extra layer of value and excitement to the game.