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 __Trailbot tracks your server's logs and files__, triggers [__Smart Policies__](https://github.com/trailbot/client/wiki/Smart-Policies) upon potentially unwanted modifications and generates an __immutable audit trail__ of everything happening in the system.
 
-[Smart Policies](https://github.com/trailbot/client/wiki/Smart-Policies) are simple scripts that get called every time a tracked file changes. They trigger actions such as emailing someone, rolling files back or even shutting the system down. There are [plenty of them ready to use](https://github.com/trailbot/client/wiki/Smart-Policies#ready-to-use-policies), and you can even [create your own](https://github.com/trailbot/client/wiki/Smart-Policies).
+[Smart Policies](https://github.com/trailbot/client/wiki/Smart-Policies) are simple scripts that get called every time a tracked file changes. They trigger actions such as emailing someone, rolling files back to a previous state or even shutting the system down. There are [plenty of them ready to use](https://github.com/trailbot/client/wiki/Smart-Policies#ready-to-use-policies), and you can even [create your own](https://github.com/trailbot/client/wiki/Smart-Policies).
 
 Trailbot has three components:
 + [__Watcher__](https://github.com/trailbot/watcher): a server daemon that monitors your files and logs, registers file events and enforces [smart policies](https://github.com/trailbot/client/wiki/Smart-Policies).
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 # Why Trailbot?
 
-Current security solutions are based on an obsolete paradigm: building walls and fences. Companies advertise their overcomplicated perimeter security systems as if they were impenetrable. But even so, we hear everyday about __cyber security breaches__ at even the largest corporations.
+Current security solutions are based on an obsolete paradigm: building walls and fences. Companies advertise their overcomplicated perimeter security systems as if they were impenetrable. But nevertheless we hear everyday about __cyber security breaches__ at even the largest corporations.
 
-Moreover, they will not protect you at all from internal breaches and __insider threats__. Furthermore, most data resides nowadays in the cloud, where walls, border and fences fade and blur.
+In any case walls and fences will not protect you at all from internal breaches and __insider threats__. Furthermore, most data resides nowadays in the cloud, where walls, borders and fences fade and blur.
 
-With Trailbot, you can rest assured of the __integrity of your data__, being it a system log or any other important file. It doesn't matter if an outsider got access to your systems or an insider decided to go rogue—__you are now in control__.
+With Trailbot you can rest assured of the __integrity of your data__, being it a system log or any other important file. It doesn't matter if an outsider got access to your systems or an insider decided to go rogue—__you are now in control__.
 
 # Installation