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   <section id="abstract">
   <p>
-  This document describes a formal model and a common representation 
+  This document describes a formal information model and a common representation 
   for a Web of Things (WoT) Thing Description 1.1. 
   A Thing Description describes the metadata and interfaces of <a>Things</a>,
   where a <a>Thing</a> is an abstraction of a physical or virtual entity that
@@ -375,15 +375,15 @@
   externally when a <a>Thing</a> has resource restrictions (e.g., limited memory space)
   or when a Web of Things-compatible legacy device is retrofitted 
   with a Thing Description.
-  Furthermore, this document introduces the Thing Model, which allows to describe 
-  only the model or class of an IoT entity. Thing Models can be seen as a template for Thing 
+  Furthermore, this document introduces the Thing Model, which allows authors to describe
+  only the model or class of an Internet of Thing (IoT) entity. Thing Models can be seen as a template for Thing 
   Description instances, but with reduced constraints such as no or few requirements for specific 
   communication metadata. 
   </p>
 
   <p>
     This specification describes a superset of the features defined in Thing Description 1.0 [[WOT-THING-DESCRIPTION]]. 
-    Unless otherwise specified, documents created with version 1.0 of this specification remain 
+    Unless otherwise specified, documents created with terms from the information model version 1.0 of this specification remain 
     compatible with Thing Description 1.1.
   </p>
   </section>
@@ -1196,15 +1196,15 @@ <h2>Core Vocabulary Definitions</h2>
           "td-context-ns-thing-mandatory">The <code>@context</code>
           name-value pair <em class="rfc2119" title=
           "MUST">MUST</em> contain the anyURI
-          <code>https://www.w3.org/2019/wot/td/v1</code> either
+          <code>https://www.w3.org/2022/wot/td/v1.1</code> either
           directly when of type <code>anyURI</code> or as first
           element when of type <a href="#dfn-array" class=
           "internalDFN" data-link-type="dfn">Array</a>.</span>
           <span class="rfc2119-assertion" id=
           "td-context-ns-thing-optional">When <code>@context</code>
           is an <a href="#dfn-array" class="internalDFN"
           data-link-type="dfn">Array</a>, the anyURI
-          <code>https://www.w3.org/2019/wot/td/v1</code> <em class=
+          <code>https://www.w3.org/2022/wot/td/v1.1</code> <em class=
           "rfc2119" title="MAY">MAY</em> be followed by elements of
           type <code>anyURI</code> or type <a href="#dfn-map"
           class="internalDFN" data-link-type="dfn">Map</a> in any

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   <section id="abstract">
   <p>
-  This document describes a formal model and a common representation 
+  This document describes a formal information model and a common representation 
   for a Web of Things (WoT) Thing Description 1.1. 
   A Thing Description describes the metadata and interfaces of <a>Things</a>,
   where a <a>Thing</a> is an abstraction of a physical or virtual entity that
@@ -375,15 +375,15 @@
   externally when a <a>Thing</a> has resource restrictions (e.g., limited memory space)
   or when a Web of Things-compatible legacy device is retrofitted 
   with a Thing Description.
-  Furthermore, this document introduces the Thing Model, which allows to describe 
-  only the model or class of an IoT entity. Thing Models can be seen as a template for Thing 
+  Furthermore, this document introduces the Thing Model, which allows authors to describe
+  only the model or class of an Internet of Thing (IoT) entity. Thing Models can be seen as a template for Thing 
   Description instances, but with reduced constraints such as no or few requirements for specific 
   communication metadata. 
   </p>
 
   <p>
     This specification describes a superset of the features defined in Thing Description 1.0 [[WOT-THING-DESCRIPTION]]. 
-    Unless otherwise specified, documents created with version 1.0 of this specification remain 
+    Unless otherwise specified, documents created with terms from the information model version 1.0 of this specification remain 
     compatible with Thing Description 1.1.
   </p>
   </section>