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for bonus task, with new branch #1104

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@@ -11,6 +13,13 @@ public class AuthenticationService {
* Return false in any other cases.
*/
public boolean login(String email, String password) {
UserService userService = new UserService();

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don't create UserService userService each time when method login is called
make it class-level variable

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How I can call method from UserService, when i don`t have member of this class?

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Can I make this method static?

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for (User user:users
) {

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for (User user:users
) {
for (User user : users) {

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I tried fix mistakes

@Sasha1256 Sasha1256 closed this Sep 28, 2024
@Sasha1256 Sasha1256 reopened this Sep 28, 2024
@@ -15,6 +15,11 @@ public class UserService {
* Return <code>null</code> if there is no suitable user
*/
public User findByEmail(String email) {
for (User user:users) {

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for (User user:users) {
for (User user : users) {

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User user = userService.findByEmail(email);
if (user != null) {
if (user.getPassword().equals(password)) {
return true;
}
}
return false;

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Let`s simplify using one return in one line

public boolean login(String email, String password) {
return false;
boolean userExist = false;

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boolean userExist = false;

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if (user != null) {
if (user.getPassword().equals(password)) {
userExist = true;
}
}
return userExist;
}

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if (user != null) {
if (user.getPassword().equals(password)) {
userExist = true;
}
}
return userExist;
}
return user != null and user.password equals(password);
}

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